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Pirouetting on Cloud Banks

Dancing in space
Waltzing in the universe
Pirouetting on cloud banks
Aah yes
Come with me
Let’s dance together

Ancient flute notes echo
Amidst starshine and lost memories
I feel you there beside me
Peeking around planets
Your eyes seeking me out

Our fibers entwined 
Through passion and loss
Our unspoken words
Spun like gold thread
Around our bleeding hearts

An inhale ~ a memory
Meeting you in the ocean
Immersing ourselves in blankets of mist and fog
Lavender foam adorned with turquoise sparkles
Glinting off wave tips

My nakedness enveloped
Salty tears
My mouth open
Searching for you

I walk through time 
Through walls of water
The waves part 
As I find my way

To the sacred place within
I feel the air ~ quiet now
My fingertips sense my surroundings
I smell your heartbeat

In darkness my palms touch yours
A vibration of heat
Of laughter
Of knowing
Of ancient memories
Coupling our souls

Copyright © Susan Lawrence | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 12/9/2022 6:53:00 PM

Hi, Susan, a glorious love poem from a deep rising voice with all its pain and joy to dance exquisitely through the heavens, whis, I am sure, helped to inspire its lines. Treasuring love poetry, I thank you! sally
Date: 12/7/2022 6:52:00 PM

Such a beautiful connection of souls, through time and space. "Our unspoken words spun like gold thread." And that is how it should be. Your thoughts are tender, romantic, and dreamy. Simply breathtaking. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 12/7/2022 3:41:00 PM

So beautiful, Susan - a journey of love "Coupling our souls Forever"! Your romantic poems simply take my breath away...deep, poignant, passionate, yet soothing! Love and warm wishes, Dear Poet ~ Mala
Date: 12/7/2022 7:45:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, Susan...enjoy reading ... soft waves of romance :) - hugs
Date: 12/7/2022 12:36:00 AM

Wow, you take me on this, a wonderful spiritual journey. Susan.
Date: 12/6/2022 10:26:00 AM

A dance of love that takes you beyond the clouds, Lovely write Susan
Date: 12/5/2022 6:08:00 PM

Stunning and beautiful poetry, Susan. A galaxy of romance within. Lovely! Hugs Charlie
Date: 12/5/2022 5:51:00 PM

Susan, your writing is really vivid and full of beautiful images. You carry us on a trip that is both gorgeous and touching as you enmesh flames.
Date: 12/5/2022 7:04:00 AM

My, my! An easy fav. You take us on a beautiful and intimate twin flame entwinement journey, dear Susan
Date: 12/4/2022 8:21:00 PM

Felicitations Susan! This is an exciting visualization of endlessness, choreographing sensual moves and expressions of joyous emotions draped in love's warmth and tenderness, beautifully painted by a radiant heart!...ab
Date: 12/4/2022 5:21:00 PM

Wonderfully evocative write with splendid imagery Susan. Enjoyed the ride on the wings of your imagination and musings. A FAVE for me!
Date: 12/4/2022 3:25:00 PM

you were REALLY affected by the tribal rituals and dances, Susan. This is incredible. I think one of my favorites that you've written. I shall fave it!
Date: 12/4/2022 3:23:00 PM

oh hi there. I was thinking of visiting you today and your comment just came in. Let me read your latest poem
Date: 12/4/2022 2:12:00 PM

Such seduction of spirit, Susan. Where space and time are emerged together, Earth is just a proverbial drop in the cosmic ocean, from a bubble it was formed. One can achieve their way inward and onward, perhaps from days of silence when all you have is internal dialogue, connected you unplug from the world, in reality, we plug into the entire universe. In touch with your soul, you match the vibe of the universal soul. A memory, a connection, with another. You've taken this amazing journey!
Date: 12/4/2022 12:04:00 PM

You paint stunning imagery in this well written verse Susan taking the reader on an amazing journey Tom
Date: 12/4/2022 10:44:00 AM

Love the imagery throughout your poem. Especially this stanza..Ancient flute notes echo Amidst starshine and lost memories I feel you there beside me Peeking around planets Your eyes seeking me out. Great poetry
Date: 12/4/2022 10:09:00 AM

Dear Susan, Your every thought so lovely, your descriptions so vivid, from the title to the last word."...meeting you in the ocean, immersing ourselves in blankets of mist and fog..." gorgeous! Happy Holidays to you, dear Susan.
Date: 12/4/2022 10:01:00 AM

You used all senses in this poem, mixing them with great imagery and movement of life. A poem of the highest grade.
Date: 12/4/2022 9:09:00 AM

Dearest Susan, my profound friend, I so enjoy melting into your exquisite poetic artistry. Your soulful imagery captivates me to share in your wish, enthralled in the fantasy your brilliant verses create "Peeking around planets" - your power of your spirit, imagination and poetic expression brings me there.. "Amidst starshine and lost memories".. I search with you. I adore your poignant contemplation as I explore your heart's universe with you, seeking what you've lost.. and for that, my lovely poetry sister, I am ever grateful. Warmest wishes and hugs sent on the light and lightness of white wings.. ~Susan