Edward Ibeh Poet Imagism

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Date written: 01/17/2024

Gloaming Wonder

          burnt-orange clouds
                   converge
             over the horizon.

                    starlings
             in the thousands,
black against the gloaming sky....

                 ^|^ flying ^|^
      in dazzling synchronicity...
      what awe-inspiring view!

          comfortably sinking
             into nature's seat,
        I fully recline, watching... 

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Susan Ashley February 4, 2024 at 5:20 PM Dear Edward, your imagery is captivating and beautiful. Indeed, lovely moments in Nature feeds the soul and inspires awe! Your last stanza is a grand finale to an exceptional appreciative poem. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan Edward Ibeh February 5, 2024 at 4:29 AM Thank you very much, Susan:-) You just made my day! Most obliged, my friend.

Vijay Pandit January 17, 2024 at 5:54 AM -- starlings in the thousands, black against the gloaming sky.... ^|^ flying ^|^ in dazzling synchronicity...perfect imagery, my friend. Edward Ibeh January 17, 2024 at 10:38 AM Thank you very much, Vijay:-)