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Date written: 01/17/2024

burnt-orange clouds converge over the horizon. starlings in the thousands, black against the gloaming sky.... ^|^ flying ^|^ in dazzling synchronicity... what awe-inspiring view! comfortably sinking into nature's seat, I fully recline, watching...

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Date: 2/4/2024 5:20:00 PM
Dear Edward, your imagery is captivating and beautiful. Indeed, lovely moments in Nature feeds the soul and inspires awe! Your last stanza is a grand finale to an exceptional appreciative poem. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/5/2024 4:29:00 AM
Thank you very much, Susan:-) You just made my day! Most obliged, my friend.
Date: 1/17/2024 5:54:00 AM
-- starlings in the thousands, black against the gloaming sky.... ^|^ flying ^|^ in dazzling synchronicity...perfect imagery, my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/17/2024 10:38:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
Date: 1/17/2024 5:33:00 AM
I'm there with ya. Nothing like a moment of nature- inspired peace
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/17/2024 10:38:00 AM
Thank you very much, Tom:-)

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