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Polka Dots and All

Teal blue skies dappled with white polka dots with hints of a sanguine sun shining through. And calm waters mirror the polka dots that vanish as time erases a few. Dusk impatiently awaits in the wings listening to competing crickets chirp. And as darkness descends a warbler sings while frogs solicit mates with a burp. Shifting shadows and silhouettes converge as liquid ebony pools drip by drip. And Twilight and dusk entangle and merge as the last traces of day start to slip. Nature's crescendo, polka dots and all saying so long summer; and hello fall. (Sonnet) Jan. 21, 2019 Polka Dots Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
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Gauthier Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 9:21 PM
A fun sonnet, Emile. Well done.
Pinet Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 8:25 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Canerdy Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 6:45 PM
SO LOVELY, Emile. CONGRATS! Janice
Pinet Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 7:05 PM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Ibeh Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 4:55 PM
Congratulations on your top win in my contest, Emile!:) A beautiful sonnet!
Pinet Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 7:05 PM
Thank you very much Edward, I appreciate the chance to compete my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 4:01 PM
This is so nice! Very well written Emile! :)
Pinet Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 4:10 PM
Thanks Heidi, I always appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Devonshire Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 3:24 PM
What a beautiful sonnet with many vivid images to describe sunset ass the seasons pass from summer to fall. Best wishes in the Polka Dot contest, Edward. The entries seem to be a mix of serious and humorous poems; I'm enjoying reading all of them.
Pinet Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 4:10 PM
Thanks Carolyn, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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