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Monotangled Sense Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Dilly Sally. Date written: 12/06/2023

Fatalist

~he knows; has been warned he's self-destructing, yet turns the other cheek. why?~

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Speaks Volumes

December 14, 2023 at 3:21 AM

I've read it several times. I keep getting the feeling he just doesn't care. I think we get to stages in our lives like that, although most of the time its fleeting and doesn't last. A pensive write, sorry if I am way off the mark, its just the way I see it. Best wishes Edward.

Edward Ibeh

December 15, 2023 at 4:56 PM

You're right, SV. He doesn't care. Happy holidays, my friend.