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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: 
line 1 to 15:  3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables. Centered, no rhyme required.



Meteors zipline across night skies from outer space disintegrating on entry to Earth's atmosphere, sparking and blazing bright streaks of fiery fragments that in the blink of an eye, morph into shooting stars. (Yalto) 08,15,2019 Shooting Stars Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 8/17/2019 2:06:00 PM
Wow, this is just beautiful, Emile:-) You do my form so well! An instant FAVE.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/17/2019 4:07:00 PM
Thanks Edward, I love your form, and I find myself using it more often my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/16/2019 11:12:00 AM
wow, great form! I never saw Edward's form before, pretty cool,, good luck! :)-luloo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/16/2019 12:00:00 PM
Thanks Lu Loo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/15/2019 3:59:00 PM
Well done, Emile. Enjoyed your poem.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/16/2019 12:00:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.