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Tutankhamun

From dead sands a step was birthed of stone ... a carved staircase leading down ... and deep. Shovels bit, whisks brushed, cartouches led on ... November twenty-six, nineteen-twenty-two, chisels breached an entrance and ... The Boy King arose! ~ 10th Place ~ in the "Yalto Poems Only" Poetry Contest, Emile Pinet, Judge & Sponsor. ( A "Yalto" is a form created by Edward Ibeh, consisting of a strict syllable count of 3, 4, 2, 4, 5, 3, 2, 3, 2, 3, 3, 5, 6, 1, 5 syllables-per-line. Verified at HowManySyllables.com ) * This speaks of the re-discovery of Tutankhamen's tomb by British Egyptologist Howard Carter, for George Herbert, 5th Earl of Carnarvon. *
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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 9:57 PM
I love to study about ancient Egypt Greg. Your Yalto is fabulous! Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo
Barden Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 12:41 AM
Thank you so very much, Connie - been a while since I wrote this one. Blessings! :o)
Awtry Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 11:33 AM
I think I could hear a drum roll and clashing cymbals. Very dramatic. Congratulations! :)
Barden Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 12:40 AM
Many kind thanks to you, PS, it is appreciated, my friend! :o) <3
Mcgee Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 6:59 PM
the magic of the dig shines through your words. Congrats Greg.
Barden Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 12:40 AM
You're very kind, Jeanne, thank you very much! :o) <3
Ibeh Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 1:11 PM
Back with congrats on a deserving win, Greg!:-)
Barden Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 12:39 AM
Thank you so much, Sir Edward! :o)
Pinet Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 10:33 AM
Congratulations Gregory, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Barden Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 12:39 AM
Thank you so very much, Emile, this means a lot to me - sorry it took so long to thank you, but I'm getting old and forgetful, lol. Blessings, My Dear Friend! :o)
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 6:45 PM
fantastic, Greg!! NOW i want to try this Yalto because your entry is so inspiring!
Barden Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 10:40 PM
Thank you so very much, Andrea, I'm happy you liked it - my first Yalto - it was fun! Best wishes in the contest, Dear Poet! :o) <3
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 7:37 AM
Aw yeah. I was an art student and captivated by the ancient Egyptians. Splendid piece my dear! Good luck in the contest. xomo
Barden Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 10:39 PM
Oh, thank you so much, Mo - I took Art History in prep school and Egyptology was my favorite period, (even more so than the Impressionists or the Renaissance, and that's saying something!) ... really happy you enjoyed this one! :o) <3
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 5:57 AM
An interesting locale for this wonderful rending -- Edward's right for methinks a winner this is -- just to note of his time, nay 1922, a fabled tale is in the making of another true Pharoah -- I hope to expose ~ Aloha always William
Barden Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 10:36 PM
Many kind thanks for the comments, William ... I'm happy you found it worthwhile, My Friend! Blessings! :o)
Ibeh Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 5:34 AM
This is a brilliant Yalto, Greg:-) It sure looks like a winner! A fave for me.
Barden Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 10:35 PM
Many thanks, My Good Man - so pleased you like it! :o)
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