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Mother, Magical, Moment Words Poetry Contest, SSponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 11/13/2023

Magical

      Mesmerizing in more ways than one!
 Astral wonder; lovers underneath Milky Way.
  Gooseberry-playing crescent moon above
Is widely smirking at jokes being exchanged.
 Cacophony of sounds; unremitting, inviting.
   A romantic picnic outing; quite magical.
 Lambency of twilight beggars description!
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Goldsmith Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. Your "Magical" is a creative Acrostic write. I loved reading this one. Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................
Ibeh Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 5:22 AM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Pandit Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 5:58 AM
Astral wonder; lovers underneath Milky Way. Gooseberry-playing crescent moon above--magical moments succinctly captured.
Ibeh Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 7:30 AM
Thank you kindly for the visit and feedback, my friend.
Baker Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 1:21 PM
I like the content of your fine "Magical" Acrostic poem, Edward. Thanks for sharing it with us. Bill
Ibeh Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 2:32 PM
Thank you very much, Bill:-)
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