Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

Transcending Hope

soft tunes speak,

whispers of light-

cry not

for my heartache,

scars have been mended,

life is sound…

once more-

love ascends,

fear breaks

its routine;

starlit nights

gleam with intense heat,

they shine as if they’re mine-

faith

is hope transcending




September 3, 2019
Yalto Poems Only Poetry Contest
Emile Pinet

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Connie Marcum Wong June 4, 2020 at 10:11 PM Wow Luloo, this is deep and beautiful! Into my Faves! I love it! Congratulations on your win with this amazing Yalto! Blessings xxoo

Suzanne Delaney October 1, 2019 at 4:33 PM Beautiful transcendent write. Congratulations.......SuZ

P.S. Awtry October 1, 2019 at 11:37 AM Powerful write! Congratulations!

Jeanne Mcgee September 30, 2019 at 6:51 PM a great write. cry not for my heartache. Love!

John Hamilton September 30, 2019 at 1:38 PM Your writing always astounds me, how you can take a simple form and produce something amazing from something so elemental. Actually a simpler form can be extremely challenging to boil thoughts and feelings down to their essence, which you accomplished!

Edward Ibeh September 30, 2019 at 12:58 PM Back with congrats on a fine win, Luloo!:-) I knew this one would be a winner!

Emile Pinet September 30, 2019 at 10:30 AM Congratulations Lu Loo, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.

Sandra Adams September 3, 2019 at 11:07 AM This is a gem of a poem, it speaks to me, not familiar with the form but this poem is purely beautiful, form or not! love it :) hugs

Sunlite Wanter September 3, 2019 at 9:55 AM So beautiful - I needed this this morning. Am not familiar with the form, but I am going to find out. First, though, a fav for the hope in it.

Edward Ibeh September 3, 2019 at 8:58 AM Excellent Yalto poem, Luloo:-) Really well-done! A definite fav for me... Beautiful Scars September 3, 2019 at 9:38 AM thank you!!! I love this form , first time I tried it :) hope I did it justice :) Be blessed dear friend :)-luloo Beautiful Scars September 3, 2019 at 9:38 AM thank you!!! I love this form , first time I tried it :) hope I did it justice :) Be blessed dear friend :)-luloo