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Transcending Hope

soft tunes speak, whispers of light- cry not for my heartache, scars have been mended, life is sound… once more- love ascends, fear breaks its routine; starlit nights gleam with intense heat, they shine as if they’re mine- faith is hope transcending September 3, 2019 Yalto Poems Only Poetry Contest Emile Pinet

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/4/2020 10:11:00 PM

Wow Luloo, this is deep and beautiful! Into my Faves! I love it! Congratulations on your win with this amazing Yalto! Blessings xxoo

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/1/2019 4:33:00 PM

Beautiful transcendent write. Congratulations.......SuZ

P.S. Awtry

Date: 10/1/2019 11:37:00 AM

Powerful write! Congratulations!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/30/2019 6:51:00 PM

a great write. cry not for my heartache. Love!

John Hamilton

Date: 9/30/2019 1:38:00 PM

Your writing always astounds me, how you can take a simple form and produce something amazing from something so elemental. Actually a simpler form can be extremely challenging to boil thoughts and feelings down to their essence, which you accomplished!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/30/2019 12:58:00 PM

Back with congrats on a fine win, Luloo!:-) I knew this one would be a winner!

Emile Pinet

Date: 9/30/2019 10:30:00 AM

Congratulations Lu Loo, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/3/2019 11:07:00 AM

This is a gem of a poem, it speaks to me, not familiar with the form but this poem is purely beautiful, form or not! love it :) hugs

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/3/2019 9:55:00 AM

So beautiful - I needed this this morning. Am not familiar with the form, but I am going to find out. First, though, a fav for the hope in it.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/3/2019 8:58:00 AM

Excellent Yalto poem, Luloo:-) Really well-done! A definite fav for me...

Lu Loo
Date: 9/3/2019 9:38:00 AM

thank you!!! I love this form , first time I tried it :) hope I did it justice :) Be blessed dear friend :)-luloo

Lu Loo
Date: 9/3/2019 9:38:00 AM

thank you!!! I love this form , first time I tried it :) hope I did it justice :) Be blessed dear friend :)-luloo