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Transcending Hope


soft tunes speak, whispers of light- cry not for my heartache, scars have been mended, life is sound… once more- love ascends, fear breaks its routine; starlit nights gleam with intense heat, they shine as if they’re mine- faith is hope transcending September 3, 2019 Yalto Poems Only Poetry Contest Emile Pinet

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Date: 10/1/2019 4:33:00 PM
Beautiful transcendent write. Congratulations.......SuZ
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Date: 10/1/2019 11:37:00 AM
Powerful write! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/30/2019 6:51:00 PM
a great write. cry not for my heartache. Love!
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Date: 9/30/2019 1:38:00 PM
Your writing always astounds me, how you can take a simple form and produce something amazing from something so elemental. Actually a simpler form can be extremely challenging to boil thoughts and feelings down to their essence, which you accomplished!
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Date: 9/30/2019 12:58:00 PM
Back with congrats on a fine win, Luloo!:-) I knew this one would be a winner!
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Date: 9/30/2019 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations Lu Loo, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 9/3/2019 11:07:00 AM
This is a gem of a poem, it speaks to me, not familiar with the form but this poem is purely beautiful, form or not! love it :) hugs
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Date: 9/3/2019 9:55:00 AM
So beautiful - I needed this this morning. Am not familiar with the form, but I am going to find out. First, though, a fav for the hope in it.
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Date: 9/3/2019 8:58:00 AM
Excellent Yalto poem, Luloo:-) Really well-done! A definite fav for me...
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Date: 9/3/2019 9:38:00 AM
thank you!!! I love this form , first time I tried it :) hope I did it justice :) Be blessed dear friend :)-luloo
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/3/2019 9:38:00 AM
thank you!!! I love this form , first time I tried it :) hope I did it justice :) Be blessed dear friend :)-luloo