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Date written: 09/13/2023

Ocean

                      D
                      e
                      e
                      p

                      d
                      o
                      w
                      n

       to the bottom, I go,
      plumbing the depths
            of the ocean
   that is your soulful eyes.
       With each glance,

                      I

 ~~~~~~~ s~~~~~~~
                      i
                      n
                      k
too deep to happily drown.
          Good heavens, 
       they are magnetic!
   it's impossible to resist 
      their seductive pull.

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Sandra L. Weiss Date: 11/13/2023 8:20:00 AM A creative verse about the ocean. My favorite topic. Glad it went to number one! Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 11/13/2023 12:51:00 PM Thank you very much, Sandra:-)

Ink Empress Date: 11/10/2023 11:57:00 AM So pleased to see this as number one in best poems congratulations again EI Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 11/10/2023 12:52:00 PM Thank you very much, Inky:-)

Lin Lane Date: 11/9/2023 2:16:00 AM This is visually unique, Edward. An attention grabber as well as a romantic message. Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 11/9/2023 2:33:00 AM Thank you very very, Lin:-)

Susan Lawrence Date: 11/5/2023 6:35:00 AM Love this creative and emotive beautiful poem dear Edward . Love the visuals you have created . Congratulations on being number one in the best new poems list ! Hugs, Susan :) Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 11/5/2023 1:27:00 PM Thank you very much, Susan:-)

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/4/2023 5:38:00 AM BIG congrats my friend--your poem is #1 on the best 100 list. Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 11/5/2023 1:25:00 PM Oh wow, thank you very much, Vijay. Most obliged.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 9/23/2023 12:43:00 PM Wonderful writing, filled with invaluable insight and magic. Like the reflections of joy found in the spring, your ocean is amazing and wonderful and blessed. God bless you always and Congrats. Love, Gina Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 11/5/2023 1:26:00 PM Thank you very much for the lovely visit and comments, Regina:-)

Valsa George Date: 9/22/2023 1:02:00 AM So beautifully written. I see an ocean of romance in this tiny drop of a poem. The emotional appeal it generates is so bewitching ! Congratulations dear Edward on your win. Well deserved ! Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 9/22/2023 5:07:00 AM Thank you very much for the visit, awesome feedback and congratulations, Valsa:-)Most obliged.

Speaks Volumes Date: 9/18/2023 5:41:00 AM As always, unique and breathtaking. I must have skipped over this originally, but reading it now, I have never read a more captivating description of sinking to the bottom of the ocean. Please continue to be different ! Congrats on a well deserved win. Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 9/18/2023 10:13:00 AM Thank you very much indeed, SV:-) Always a delight to hear your feedback, my friend.

Ink Empress Date: 9/18/2023 4:05:00 AM Dear EI! I absolutely loved this creative write, not just the arrangement of words and presentation but also the depth of passionate emotions you’ve conveyed here in such a heartfelt manner! I see also ink! And i loved that! How clever! Ocean eyes, deep and captivating and like you’ve said magnetic you’ve depicted effortlessly! Brilliant write really! Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 9/18/2023 5:22:00 AM Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback, visit and congratulations, Inky:-) Most obliged, my friend.

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/14/2023 9:22:00 AM Unique take on the contest theme, Edward. Delightfully creative with a hint of tease and romance. Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 9/14/2023 10:44:00 AM Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

Hiya Sharma Date: 9/14/2023 9:11:00 AM Oh wow, this is quite an intriguing and captivating poem, Edward. I really like the way you've written this, in a raw yet captivating way, full of evocative depth.. "Plumbing the depths of the ocean that is your soulful eyes", "they are magnetic" Yes indeed.. A creative take for the contest! Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 9/14/2023 10:43:00 AM Thank you very much, Hiya:-)