Edward Ibeh Poet Other

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Date written: 09/13/2023

Ocean

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       to the bottom, I go,
      plumbing the depths
            of the ocean
   that is your soulful eyes.
       With each glance,

                      I

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                      n
                      k
too deep to happily drown.
          Good heavens, 
       they are magnetic!
   it's impossible to resist 
      their seductive pull.

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Joanna Daniel September 11, 2026 at 8:26 AM This is a beautiful captivating poem with such tenderness and I love how you visually constructed this, Edward😊 Edward Ibeh September 11, 2026 at 1:33 PM Thank you so much, Joanna🙏 This poem is infinitely special to me because I wrote it for my better half.😊

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2026 at 11:41 PM Sooo romantic. Love it!💕🌹 Edward Ibeh August 5, 2026 at 2:36 AM Thank you so much, Andrea🙏

Ink Empress July 18, 2026 at 3:41 AM Gosh I remember this one ~ I still love it dear EI! Great poem to pin! Edward Ibeh July 18, 2026 at 6:02 AM Thank you very much for the revisit, dear Inky:-)

Ink Empress November 10, 2023 at 11:57 AM So pleased to see this as number one in best poems congratulations again EI Edward Ibeh November 10, 2023 at 12:52 PM Thank you very much, Inky:-)

Lin Lane November 9, 2023 at 2:16 AM This is visually unique, Edward. An attention grabber as well as a romantic message. Edward Ibeh November 9, 2023 at 2:33 AM Thank you very very, Lin:-)

Susan Lawrence November 5, 2023 at 6:35 AM Love this creative and emotive beautiful poem dear Edward . Love the visuals you have created . Congratulations on being number one in the best new poems list ! Hugs, Susan :) Edward Ibeh November 5, 2023 at 1:27 PM Thank you very much, Susan:-)

Vijay Pandit November 4, 2023 at 5:38 AM BIG congrats my friend--your poem is #1 on the best 100 list. Edward Ibeh November 5, 2023 at 1:25 PM Oh wow, thank you very much, Vijay. Most obliged.

Regina Mcintosh September 23, 2023 at 12:43 PM Wonderful writing, filled with invaluable insight and magic. Like the reflections of joy found in the spring, your ocean is amazing and wonderful and blessed. God bless you always and Congrats. Love, Gina Edward Ibeh November 5, 2023 at 1:26 PM Thank you very much for the lovely visit and comments, Regina:-)

Valsa George September 22, 2023 at 1:02 AM So beautifully written. I see an ocean of romance in this tiny drop of a poem. The emotional appeal it generates is so bewitching ! Congratulations dear Edward on your win. Well deserved ! Edward Ibeh September 22, 2023 at 5:07 AM Thank you very much for the visit, awesome feedback and congratulations, Valsa:-)Most obliged.

Speaks Volumes September 18, 2023 at 5:41 AM As always, unique and breathtaking. I must have skipped over this originally, but reading it now, I have never read a more captivating description of sinking to the bottom of the ocean. Please continue to be different ! Congrats on a well deserved win. Edward Ibeh September 18, 2023 at 10:13 AM Thank you very much indeed, SV:-) Always a delight to hear your feedback, my friend.

Ink Empress September 18, 2023 at 4:05 AM Dear EI! I absolutely loved this creative write, not just the arrangement of words and presentation but also the depth of passionate emotions you’ve conveyed here in such a heartfelt manner! I see also ink! And i loved that! How clever! Ocean eyes, deep and captivating and like you’ve said magnetic you’ve depicted effortlessly! Brilliant write really! Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS Edward Ibeh September 18, 2023 at 5:22 AM Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback, visit and congratulations, Inky:-) Most obliged, my friend.

Vijay Pandit September 14, 2023 at 9:22 AM Unique take on the contest theme, Edward. Delightfully creative with a hint of tease and romance. Edward Ibeh September 14, 2023 at 10:44 AM Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

Hiya Sharma September 14, 2023 at 9:11 AM Oh wow, this is quite an intriguing and captivating poem, Edward. I really like the way you've written this, in a raw yet captivating way, full of evocative depth.. "Plumbing the depths of the ocean that is your soulful eyes", "they are magnetic" Yes indeed.. A creative take for the contest! Edward Ibeh September 14, 2023 at 10:43 AM Thank you very much, Hiya:-)