Notes About The Poem

I Am Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Underling Seeker. Date written: 02/20/2024

I Am


I am a feather in the wind;  
neither lost nor aimless, simply drifting.

I am a constant flowing river...
I walk with feet of clay; a work in progress.

I am a gentle dove of a man,
a quiet storm of inner peace.

I am light switched on 
in a world of shadows; it shows in my smile.

I am beauty in ugliness;
incorrigible optimist, a faithful soul.

I am poetry, published and unwritten;
a bard with a every present pen.

I am a soldier of truth,
endlessly seeking clarity and enlightenment.

I am a conqueror of destiny;
a coconut: tough shell yet soft inside.

I am mindfulness,
kindness, joyfulness; a gift from God.

I am, most of all...
a man of value.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

George Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 12:27 AM
I feel your self-assessment is 100 percent correct! You are a poet, an optimist, a faithful soul, a sincere friend to many, and a gift from God. Stay as you are forever dear Edward! Beautiful poem.
Ibeh Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 9:53 AM
Thank you very much, Valsa:-)
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 12:54 PM
Superb metaphors, my friend. A brilliant introspection--aren't we all in some way--a work in progress? I like that thought.
Ibeh Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 2:00 PM
We are indeed! Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace