Two Voices

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Date written: 01/08/2024

In our heads are two voices. One is deceitful, judgmental... You're not good enough. You're not beautiful enough. You're not strong enough. You're not lovable. You're not worthy. You will fail if you try. Laugh off these falsehoods and listen to the other voice within that tells you the unvarnished truth... You are enough. You are beautiful. You are strong. You are lovable. You are a trophy to be held up high! You will succeed, every time.

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 1/14/2024 5:17:00 PM

Its great advice my friend, but I will be satisfied if I can conjure a median between the two. Overconfidence can lead to disappointment, in my own experience. Your poem just became a wake up call to me that I must consciously create a mid way point between my voices. Thank you for your (once again) unique and valued poetry.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/14/2024 8:07:00 PM

Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and visit, SV:-) Much appreciated, my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/10/2024 8:37:00 PM

You are…Edward! Nice!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/14/2024 8:08:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim:-) Blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/9/2024 7:04:00 AM

Powerful message my friend. Your poem dwells in hope and inspiration. Uplifting thoughts!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/9/2024 7:49:00 AM

Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

Tom Woody

Date: 1/9/2024 5:38:00 AM

I'm feeling prettier already thanks to this uplifting poem Ed

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/9/2024 7:49:00 AM

Thank you very much, Tom:-)

Ink Empress

Date: 1/9/2024 1:20:00 AM

Dear EI, you always say the most touching things through your poetry! Sometimes we all feel like we are not good enough. And to hear these words is truly much needed for us all. I especially love how you’ve written “ You are enough. You are beautiful. You are strong.“! I hope this reaches many. A fave this is for me

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/9/2024 4:08:00 AM

Thank very very for the wonderful feedback, visit and fave, Inky:-) You've brightened up my day this morning! Most obliged.