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Fragility of Fate

Upon my pilgrimage yearning for love.
I found myself surrounded by a plethora of petals.

Day and night I searched for a fragrance.
An aroma that would lead to you.

As twilight dimmed clementine horizons,
there you were,
glistening in the moonlight.

Your scent seduced my senses,
my heart became a willing admirer.

Something awoke that day,
forgotten emotions suppressed
by fate's injustices, were reborn,
illuminated like the blazing sun.

Yet such is the fragility of fate -
as sins from the heavens poured,
forming a turbulent tempest,
you wilted, and I was unable to save you.

In the sadness of silence,
I watched as your petals floated away

so I waited, 
hoping the winds would take me too

but I'm still here -
Isolated - shivering, soaking in misery,
without a petal to call my own.

Silent One
Simple Musing
16 July 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Babcock Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 11:36 AM
A sad romantic piece and have to go back and read more of your poems. You are such a good romantic writer. love phyl
Ibeh Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 5:36 AM
Oustanding write, as always! You're such a great poet, Silent One:-) Faved.
Arowolo Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 6:17 PM
Beautiful piece.Wonderful write.. Keep it up ,great poet .
Arowolo Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 6:12 PM
Beautiful piece.Wonderful write.. Keep it up ,great poet .
White Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 3:24 AM
As a child I used to pick dandelions and pluck each petal and as the wind took it from my fingers “He loves me” than with the next unresisting petal “He loves me not” would whisper from my lips. Till the last petal was plucked and my childhood crush loved me or loved me not. What a treasure you have penned SO. Kelli
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 24, 2019 at 10:59 PM
I felt there were many metaphors in this lovely sad poem Silent. Enthralling work! xxoo
Y. Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 11:32 AM
Hi Silent, You penned such a sad and well written piece- Alexis
Canerdy Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 8:49 AM
Very moving piece on loss and loneliness, S.O. Janice
Lindley Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 7:34 AM
A truly great poem, one that ended in expression of the loss that most precious thing one loves.... And so true to life in its sad ending.. A fav.. a true gem too...
Rodrigues Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 6:50 AM
dimmed clementine horizons...fragility of fate/I can see the lovely petals floating Way. Beautiful and sad imagery.
Mchattie Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 10:29 PM
Wonderful expression of the feelings we all have at one time or another. Nicely done. Have a great day.
Callus Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 3:19 PM
Metaphorically expressive S-1. Sad yet beautiful. Regards // paul
Proxenos Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 3:28 PM
You have mesmerized me Silent One, your poem is intoxicating - the abundance or plethora of petals ...... an aroma that would lead to you - your impeccable choice of wondrous words laced together to produce a sad but beautiful love story is astounding. Hugs, Jennifer.
Teagan Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 2:22 PM
Very sad. Too sad :( Heartbreaking. No one should feel so alone, yet many of us do. I love the way your poems stir the emotions, Silent One.
Sergi Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 2:13 PM
Hi Silent One: A plethora of words in thoughts of love. My compliments!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 11:54 AM
The flow of your words captivates the avid reader's soul.. the stream of the sad emotions reaches the chambers of the heart in supreme silence! Great Musing! A great pleasure to read and fave.. deepest regards and blessings.
Nicole Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 11:30 PM
So many emotions tangle around your words. This is beautiful, tender and sad all at the same time. Sometimes, love is like the wind, here one moment- then gone the next. Your thoughts wrap gently around my heart. ~ Brandy
Rose  Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 4:18 PM
Ah, your cleaving my heart and my soul too with this sad sad poem, xo
S     Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 4:46 AM
So tragically beautiful. You have an amazing gift dear poet.
Whitmore Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 8:23 PM
I enjoyed reading this Silent One. It has a crescendo that is captivating.
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 7:25 PM
beautiful imagery. I especially loved plethora of petals!
B. Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 5:24 PM
Very touching poem. It left me with a lump in my throat.
Leiser Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 3:48 PM
Such beautiful, romantic words and outstanding metaphors, Silent! Your talent shines, a fave! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 1:25 PM
Heartsickness...to the point where you want the Lord to take you too...yet there is goodness in the love received and the poignant emotions. Hugs... Kim
Godwin Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 1:01 PM
Oh, your poem moved me, struck some undefined sense of loss inside me as the petals were lost to you. Solid emotional writing. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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