Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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Written in Yalto form: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables. Oasis, Oblivion, Odysseus Words Poetry Contest. Sponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 02/04/2024

Odyssey

big circle 
     closes it's loop.
          a long 
                journey over;
                     weaving through life's maze 
                           with endless 
                                 dead-ends.

they unite,
     at last. 
           this is their 
                destiny.
                      the former flames were 
                           meant to find each other;
                                 their...

love story complete.

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Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2024 at 7:19 AM - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - Great poem, Edward - hugs Edward Ibeh January 15, 2024 at 7:31 AM Thank you very much. Anne-Lise:-)

Christuraj Alex January 14, 2024 at 8:21 PM " the former flames were meant to find each other; their..." - Great work. Congratulations! Edward Ibeh January 15, 2024 at 2:07 AM Thank you very much, Christuraj.

Constance La France January 14, 2024 at 4:20 PM Edward, I love your poem and the layout, congratulations on your win, well done Constance Edward Ibeh January 14, 2024 at 8:06 PM Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, Constance:-) Most obliged.

Vijay Pandit January 4, 2024 at 6:20 AM You shine my friend in your signature form-- a story well told. I like the positive turn and ending. Edward Ibeh January 4, 2024 at 7:11 AM Thank you very much indeed, Vijay:-)