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Written in Yalto form: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables. Oasis, Oblivion, Odysseus Words Poetry Contest. Sponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 02/04/2024
big circle closes it's loop. a long journey over; weaving through life's maze with endless dead-ends. they unite, at last. this is their destiny. the former flames were meant to find each other; their... love story complete.

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Date: 1/15/2024 7:19:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - Great poem, Edward - hugs
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/15/2024 7:31:00 AM
Thank you very much. Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 1/14/2024 8:21:00 PM
" the former flames were meant to find each other; their..." - Great work. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/15/2024 2:07:00 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj.
Date: 1/14/2024 4:20:00 PM
Edward, I love your poem and the layout, congratulations on your win, well done Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/14/2024 8:06:00 PM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 1/4/2024 6:20:00 AM
You shine my friend in your signature form-- a story well told. I like the positive turn and ending.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/4/2024 7:11:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Vijay:-)

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