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Writing Challenge - Angelic or Abandoned Words - Poetry Contest. Sponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 08/21/2023

faint whimpering in alley. man's best friend without a friend. this is infuriating; abandoned roadside

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Constance La France

Date: 9/12/2023 5:24:00 PM

Edward, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/26/2023 9:14:00 AM

This is so heartfelt, deep, evocative and soul stirringly powerful with such few words, an absolutely phenomenal write..

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/26/2023 1:35:00 PM

Thank you very much, Hiya:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/23/2023 10:36:00 AM

- Congratulations with this moving Abandoned poem, Edward - hugs

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/26/2023 1:35:00 PM

Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/22/2023 1:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. Have a great day............

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/26/2023 1:36:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paula:-)

Debjani Mitra

Date: 8/22/2023 1:15:00 AM

So few words...ppwerful one Edward. heartbreaking emotions it aroused im reader. Congrats

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/22/2023 2:25:00 AM

Thank you very much, Debjani:-)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/21/2023 9:55:00 PM

Blessed light to such darkness Edward, well done!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/22/2023 2:25:00 AM

Thank you very much, James:-)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/21/2023 8:27:00 PM

Brutal and painful. Far better to find it another living home. It’s not difficult. Put in an ad and there will be many takers. Sad.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/21/2023 9:30:00 PM

I couldn't agree more, Seeker:-) There are so many humane ways to give up a pet than dumping it out in the street like trash, smh..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/21/2023 2:03:00 PM

Heartbreaking when it happens. Much depth to your poem, my friend.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/21/2023 4:16:00 PM

Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

Jay Narain

Date: 8/21/2023 10:28:00 AM

Sad, it happens rarely. Well penned.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/21/2023 10:43:00 AM

Thank you very much, Jay:-)

Tom Woody

Date: 8/21/2023 6:24:00 AM

Sad, sad. My dad used to do this when he got tired of our pets. It happens

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/21/2023 7:41:00 AM

Sad indeed. It's better to call animal care centers to come and pick them up. Thanks for dropping by, Tom:-)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/21/2023 5:39:00 AM

Sad that this happens but awesome you found the deserted animal and now care for it. Sara

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/21/2023 7:36:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely visit, Sara:-) This isn't a true write. It was written just for Constance's contest, my friend.