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Grandeur of nature

Upon glimpse of horizon when rainbow colors sprout A tiny fawn scurries, emerging from its stealth hideout Strolling beneath falling petals of crepe-myrtle flowers Glinting rays of ruby-sun through waning rain showers. Illuminating breezing prairies golden twilight thrills As eventide’s amber beams glimmer verdant hills Rustling green foothills in summer’s sparkling appeal Quivering shamrock leaves in evening’s tranquil zeal. Scintillating purple canvas sunset’s marigold hues vie Donning spirited crimson vibes on blazing orange sky While bluebirds twitter joy, as robins trill zesty reply Where sparrows hop, and fly, bidding the day goodbye. Tender dusk unfolds slowly, revealing mauve insights As gentle winds sigh, caressing stone color heights Where peeking moon enlightens face of dreamy night Mesmerizing smitten sights, sprinkling astral delight. Quietude reigns now, setting stage for celestial dance Hypnotizing doting visions, mesmerizing riveting stance Where constellations woo romance glinting Milky Way As nightingale’s song serenades joviality of blissful day. August 10, 2020 N/A: Nature rhyming poetry contest

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Date: 8/22/2020 6:39:00 AM
Brenda will love this poem Vijay -a serene scene of nature. I love your tiny fawn and your nightingales serenading - brilliant write Vijay. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/22/2020 1:04:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer--much appreciate.
Date: 8/21/2020 1:20:00 PM
A celebration of Nature in all its beauty, symphony and serenity with a poetic touch of a masterful pen and creative imagination.. A poet of grandeur that meets the "grandeur of Nature"! What a delight to read your wonderful poetry, dear Vijay! Best regards and blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/22/2020 1:03:00 PM
Much appreciate your kind remarks, Besma--many many thanks.
Date: 8/13/2020 5:36:00 PM
This is vibrantly tranquil if you know what I mean; beautiful imagery.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/18/2020 3:25:00 PM
Much appreciate MLK--many thanks.
Date: 8/12/2020 10:50:00 AM
I love the way you created the many beautiful sights and sounds of nature, Vijay. (We do see the deer here most often at sunset.) And your description of the heavens in the last verse is extraordinary. Another gem from you and a fave for me! Hugs, carolyn
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/12/2020 1:31:00 PM
So very kind of you my friend. Always delighted to read your much valued comments, Carolyn. Much appreciate--many thanks. A FAVE from you is a special treat my friend. Indeed an honor!
Date: 8/12/2020 3:25:00 AM
You bring me to the wake and to the sleep, each word penned to rise the sense, and calm it Vijay, Thankyou for your poetry today, Have a blessed one.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/12/2020 5:10:00 AM
Much appreciate, Vienna--many thanks my friend.
Date: 8/11/2020 4:11:00 PM
This is lovely and inspiring. I truly enjoyed the words you've written and hope you're doing well and staying safe, my friend. God bless you
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/12/2020 5:10:00 AM
Thank you Gina--much appreciate.
Date: 8/11/2020 1:02:00 PM
where quietude reigns, amazing imagery abounds!! A sure winner.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2020 3:10:00 PM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate your kind remarks.
Date: 8/11/2020 12:01:00 PM
Romantic, filled with beautiful imagery!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2020 3:10:00 PM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, Kim--many thanks.
Date: 8/11/2020 6:41:00 AM
This is a dazzling write Vijay almost equal to the grandeur of nature itself, almost because our imperfection limits our expressions describing divine beauty. However this is as close to perfection a human can write so it is a fave for me!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2020 6:59:00 AM
It would be an understatement to say I am much honored by your visit and such awesome comments. You are one of a kind, John-- truly a gem in your discourse on poetry soup ( and I am sure in your life in general). A FAVE--especially from you-- is a treasure! Many many thanks.
Date: 8/11/2020 6:17:00 AM
Remarkable imageries flown throughout your splendid nature muse ...Vijay sir, Loved it..!! Great work..Will bring you great honour. My best wishes for you in the contest.:-) Have a wonderful day.Take care.Warmest regards coming your way:-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2020 6:54:00 AM
Thank you my friend--I am honored by your salutations--truly a hallmark of your (and my) culture. Happy to read your comments--many thanks Deepa.
Date: 8/11/2020 4:53:00 AM
Each of your poems that refers to nature brings to life nature itself and its magic, my friend, Vijay. Another outstanding hymn to nature that deserves a FAVE. Blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2020 6:51:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I am always delighted by your valued opinion, but especially touched by your heartfelt compliments. Many thanks Demetrios. And a very special thank you foe the FAVE.
Date: 8/11/2020 3:53:00 AM
Wow.. Upon glimpse of horizon when rainbow colors sprout.. How could you manage to dip the brush to paint such beauty!! Really amused of the imagery unraveled in each line.. Salutes to the nature poet..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2020 4:49:00 AM
So very kind of you Jenish--much appreciate your opinion and support--many thanks.
Date: 8/11/2020 3:06:00 AM
Reminds me of beautiful Nigeria. Moving poem.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2020 4:48:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and comments Kirsten--much appreciate. I hear Nigeria is beautiful--never been there.
Date: 8/11/2020 2:38:00 AM
Superb imagery of nature Vijay, composed so well. Greetings from Woolacombe bay, Good luck in the contest Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2020 4:47:00 AM
You are having a great time there--way to go, Tom. Much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks.
Date: 8/11/2020 2:16:00 AM
This is charmingly fantabulous poetry, Vijay, love your colour images :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2020 4:44:00 AM
So very kind of you to say that, Jo--much appreciate--many many thanks.
Date: 8/10/2020 4:17:00 PM
Simplicity lingers in your world, but moments are so magical. Breathtaking even. As I walk through your words, I want to wrap the beauty softly around me. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2020 4:44:00 AM
Much appreciate my friend. Your visit always a pleasant read. Many thanks, Brandy.
Date: 8/10/2020 1:24:00 PM
- Give the reader many beautiful pictures, Vijay ... a wonderful poem and rhyme ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2020 4:43:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate.
Date: 8/10/2020 12:05:00 PM
As I was reading this, I was thinking how mesmerizing it is and then came along the word toward the end. Absolutely beautiful Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2020 4:43:00 AM
So very kind of you Heidi--much appreciate your remarks--many thanks.