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A Hi-Poo Senryu Poetry Contest, Sponsor - John Lawless. Date: 10/08/2023

Stinky Shoe

stepped right in dog poo
 don't on my mat or carpet! ~
how did that happen?
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 5:47 PM
Not being a pet owner, --yet, such be the short-lived uninvited that occasioned my Ked's/this tyke never heard of Jordan's. The constant night trash can messed up makers/raccoons, had the entire neighborhood calling animal control ... Egad! My compliments, Edward, in John's contest, my friend! Aloha, William
Fowler Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 1:52 PM
Not a good look on carpet Edward. LOL Congratulations! :)
Ibeh Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 2:55 PM
Haha, thank you, Linda:-)
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 8:01 AM
yeuk I hate dog poop it really is my pet hate! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 3:01 PM
Thank you very very much, Jan:-) A lot of people don't pick up after their dog, I might add.
Empress Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 3:05 AM
Hahaha funny senryu! Been there! Love this
Ibeh Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 4:04 AM
Thank you very much for the visit, Inky:-) I'm glad you did!
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