Weep No More

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Wistful, Write, Weep, Whisper Words Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 04/11/2024. Written in Yalto Form: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

weep no more, little peanut i'm here, so is Mommy. we didn't wander very far; just in... the next room. your cry, we both heard, and we're here to dry every tear. weep no more, my baby. we'll... never leave your sight!

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Constance La France

Date: 4/23/2024 4:51:00 AM

Edward, congratulations on your win in my contest with your delightful and creative poem, Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/14/2024 7:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write. You are lucky to have her/she is lucky to have you both. They grow up very fast so enjoy her every day...... Have a wonderful day.................

Ink Empress

Date: 4/12/2024 10:11:00 AM

Awwn thats so sweet, how old is your little one? Must be such a joy, to experience parenthood? This reminded me of when my son was little. Nostalgic. And so touching! Well written for the prompt. Pleasure always reading your work

Ink Empress
Date: 4/12/2024 11:57:00 AM

Beautiful name! Must be so adorable and lucky is she to have parents that are loving! May the almighty protect her from all evil eyes. Sending your little one hugs

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/12/2024 10:39:00 AM

She's almost 10 months old. Her name is Isabelle. Thank you for the lovely visit, Inky:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/12/2024 5:40:00 AM

So tender a poem, my friend--exuding love and care for the baby--from the hearts of parents. Splendidly delivered in your signature form, Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/12/2024 10:46:00 AM

Thank you very much as always, Vijay:-)