Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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Seven-Ten Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Emile Pinet. Date written: 08/26/2023

If Ever

                    if ever there is no moon 
               hanging above your night sky,
       tuck all your worries under your pillow.
don't let them hold you hostage, simply sleep.
    sleep tight; you'll wake up to a rising Sun.
                   if ever you're lost in life's 
                 intricate, serpentine maze, 
do not be dismayed; they come with forks, too.
     you'll find your way, that I can assure you.
   keep moving, you'll find one in your journey.
                   if ever you find yourself 
             trapped beneath the undertow 
      of consuming despair, don't fret or fear.
       you'll get your head above water if you 
      cling to the unbreakable thread of hope.
                 if ever you lose your faith 
                       in humanity, in God,
      it's never too late to find your way back.
    with faith, you're never in the dark for long,
    for the Lord will help guide you to the light.
                    and if ever you need me,
                day or night, reach out to me.

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Jan Allison October 1, 2023 at 8:14 AM so uplifting Edward, your faith shines like a beacon in dark times. many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Edward Ibeh October 1, 2023 at 4:03 PM Thank you so much, Jan:-)

Linda Alice Fowler October 1, 2023 at 7:57 AM I love the flow of this Edward. An inspiring write! Congratulations! :) Edward Ibeh October 1, 2023 at 4:03 PM Thank you very much, Linda:-)

Emile Pinet September 30, 2023 at 1:33 PM Congratulations Edward! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. Beautiful work, my friend, Emile. Edward Ibeh September 30, 2023 at 1:56 PM Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and my placement, Emile:-) Most obliged.

Christina Bowring August 27, 2023 at 4:09 PM A beautiful poem Edward. I love the line,’tuck all your worries under the pillow’ especially. So well written and touching with so much hope and positivity. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Edward Ibeh August 27, 2023 at 4:15 PM Thank you very much, Christina:-) I'm glad you did!

Vijay Pandit August 27, 2023 at 5:11 AM Much inspiration throughout, expertly conveyed in this difficult to execute form. Splendid write, my friend--truly uplifting! Edward Ibeh August 27, 2023 at 1:08 PM Thank you very much indeed, Vijay:-) Most appreciated, my friend.

Aurore Severo August 26, 2023 at 10:01 PM Beautiful, I needed to read an uplifting poem tonight! Edward Ibeh August 27, 2023 at 1:05 PM Thank you so much, Aurore:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu August 26, 2023 at 3:41 PM Hello Edward, this poem is full of encouragement. It is a beautiful poem filled with strength. I will make it my fav. blessings my friend. /Darlene\ Darlene De Beaulieu August 28, 2023 at 11:37 AM Hello Edward, you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\ Edward Ibeh August 27, 2023 at 1:05 PM Thank you very much, Darlene:-) I appreciate the fave, my friend.

Speaks Volumes August 26, 2023 at 1:25 PM If ever there was a poem to induce Faith and encouragement to forge ahead it is this one. Enjoyed it, taking it in as I read. We forget some times in this crazy world. Sometimes it seems much easier to just give up. Your poem reminds us that the struggle is worth it, try it and you'll come out on the sunny side. Brilliant thank you Edward. Edward Ibeh August 26, 2023 at 1:28 PM Thank you very much, SV:-) It's always a delight reading your wonderful, supportive feedback, my friend.