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The Unsupervised Stop Sign Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Craig Cornish. Date: 10/22/2023
Flirting with disaster On this fast-moving highway of life; Speed demons incurably infected With the disease of impatience. I tremble with disgust When shaken by a fierce gust of wind Engendered by ill-advised velocity. Acknowledge me, disrespecting demons. Don't barrel your way through as if I'm not there, Lest you recklessly careen off An approaching curve on the road; A hefty price paid For sledgehammer stupidity. The rules of the road couldn't be More simple; slow down And stop for me. Come to a complete stop Like everyone else; look sideways, Then proceed with caution.

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Date: 10/23/2023 8:05:00 AM
Excellent use of personification, Edward! What's REALLY bad is when some idiot runs a stop sign while TEXTING!! Janice
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/24/2023 5:26:00 AM
Thank you very much, Janice:-) I couldn't agree more. It's mind-boggling, my friend.

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