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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15:  3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5, no rhyme required. 

Time is not a ticking clock, it has no past, present, or distinct future; each moment woven forever in the fabric of creation is eternal and as infinite as space yet, recognizable. (Yalto) 07/02/2020 Time- 8 Word Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsored by: A Dear Heart

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Date: 7/7/2020 4:26:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my time contest, excellent writing and a FAV for me, and congratulations on your POTD too _Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/7/2020 5:50:00 PM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate both the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/7/2020 1:57:00 PM
This is brilliant execution of thoughtful words in a gorgeously formatted Yalto Emile. Congratulations on your win my friend and on POTD :)
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Date: 7/7/2020 3:34:00 PM
Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your warm comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/7/2020 7:12:00 AM
Gladly, do I concede defeat to your first place, Emile. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/7/2020 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Jenna, Your words have made my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/7/2020 6:34:00 AM
Back with heartiest congratulations! I'm glad your Yalto gem scored a POTD recognition as well as 1st place win in Constance's "Time" contest, Emile:-)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/7/2020 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/7/2020 2:03:00 AM
Dual compliments are rightfully forthcoming, Emile, for your righteous endeavors in achieving, POTD and 1st Place in Dear Heart's TIME contest -- my extended courtesies truly my friend -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/7/2020 8:50:00 AM
Thanks William, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/7/2020 12:16:00 AM
Creativity at the best.. Profound.. Congrats on your great win Emile..
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Date: 7/7/2020 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Jenish, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/5/2020 2:52:00 AM
KUDO,s Panagiota xx Pulling you win in this contest )))
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Date: 7/5/2020 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Panagiota, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/5/2020 12:08:00 AM
Emilie, congratulations on your POTD. "Time is not a ticking clock" - you had me from that line. I also love the descending line structure - like time passing. All the best.
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Date: 7/5/2020 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Sam, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/4/2020 8:55:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD Emile, a wonderful gem!
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Date: 7/5/2020 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Tania, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/4/2020 8:49:00 PM
Woohoo! Great Yalto, Emlie. I too like the Edward's form. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/5/2020 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/4/2020 7:53:00 PM
You are exactly right. Time is forever, yet- each moment is slowly slipping away. It is truly amazing to think about. Your thoughts hold so much truth. This is so beautifully expressed. Congratulations Emile, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 7/5/2020 8:48:00 AM
Thanks Brandy, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/4/2020 5:41:00 PM
Wow Emile! You used these words like the master poet you are with such depth and veracity that makes this poem timeless! Congratulations on your much deserved POTD Emile. I must save this gem to my Faves. Bravo! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/4/2020 7:11:00 PM
Connie, your words have found my heart and I am very thankful. I needed a positive stroke today and I have found it within your most thoughtful words, again I thank you. Emile.
Date: 7/4/2020 4:23:00 PM
Emile, this is exquisite poetry - using the 8 required words and working within the constraints of the yalto form, you have crafted a philosophical gem of depth, beauty, and wisdom. Hats off to you for this much-deserved POTD.
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Date: 7/4/2020 7:09:00 PM
Thanks John, I bask in the warmth of your praise my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/4/2020 2:34:00 PM
It's been a while since I've visited you, Emile. I see you haven't lost any of your talent. POTD...good for you!
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Date: 7/4/2020 3:56:00 PM
Thanks Lin, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/4/2020 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations to your p.o.t.d win. You are so right when you say, "Time is not a ticking clock." Time is a funny thing that we cannot do anything about. Have a wonderful weekend.............
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Date: 7/4/2020 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Paula, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/4/2020 10:56:00 AM
Beautifully said...usually I don't like being given words we all have to use, but you did this as if they were meant to be said and used just like this. Well done my friend! Congrats on your POTD and go for the win!
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Date: 7/4/2020 12:10:00 PM
Thanks Jeanne, I appreciate your encouragement and great comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/4/2020 9:05:00 AM
Your inclusion of the 8 required words is depicted perfectly in this form, Emile, as though they are the movement of a clock. Bravo
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Date: 7/4/2020 9:19:00 AM
Thanks Jenna, I appreciate your great comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/4/2020 8:37:00 AM
Succinct and artful composition, beautifully done Emile! Congratulations on POTD. ~Maureen
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Date: 7/4/2020 9:18:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/4/2020 7:33:00 AM
Very deep- Congratulations on POTD, Emile
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Date: 7/4/2020 4:07:00 AM
Time for POTD!!...Congrats!! Emile...great time peace entry...best wishes...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/4/2020 9:17:00 AM
Thanks WW, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/4/2020 4:06:00 AM
- Congratulations to your p.o.t.d., Emile - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/4/2020 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/2/2020 9:36:00 PM
Well done Emile, I often think of time and how undefinable it is, such a mystery but we're stuck with it!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/3/2020 9:04:00 AM
Thanks John, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/2/2020 8:52:00 PM
What a remarkable Yalto, Emile:-) This looks like a sure winner to me. Faved.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/3/2020 9:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Edward, I do love your form my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/2/2020 8:06:00 PM
I agree...Well done too
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/3/2020 9:03:00 AM
Thanks Arturo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/2/2020 2:57:00 PM
A GREAT and profound poem, Emile. Faved!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/3/2020 9:02:00 AM
Thanks Carole, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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