Forlorn Hope

The Face of Hope

The face of hope never masquerades in forlorn visages
Towering above spiraling pits in the dark midnight of essence
Breaks disingenuous chains of nightmare’s clutches
In bleak mansions of the dark moon to warm their hearths 
Refusing to prostitute possibility 
With poignancy that probes lost footsteps trying to hold onto
Perfect moments of saline life support
Steps in to shine with opportunities’ bright smile
Refuses to accept the suicide of love
On rocks of the torn heart’s tragedy 
Or see unscalable opaque obstacles
Or wear the mask of homeless helplessness
Discarding pity’s piercing banshee sneer
Fate’s cynical demand to fulfill obtuse fate

The face of hope refuses to wear desolate –
Or a God forsaken destiny -
Bereft of moonlight squeezing between
Abandoned footprints of dreams 
Smothered by smog
A single shaft of illumination – a cloak protecting fragile insight
Never bewitched by night’s dead space,
Wearing victory’s luminosity of enduring promise,
Vanquishing a taunting laughter of ridicule 
To break down anxiety’s imagined walls 
Surrounding the paradise of foolishness
With dawning reveries of one bright star.
Abiding in eternal covenant
The face of hope never masquerades in forlorn visages.

5-6-21
Contest: This or That
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 2/17/2022 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations for your win. An amazing/powerful write. Love It. Have a blessed day................
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/18/2022 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Paula. I always love your visits and your messages. Sending you blessings. Hope you have a wonderful three day weekend!
Date: 2/16/2022 2:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful Second placement! Blessings xxoo
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/18/2022 12:07:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend! This contest theme was a wonderful way to explore the parameters of hope. It is such a living gift. Have a wonderful weekend! Sending you blessings and hugs!
Date: 2/16/2022 12:06:00 PM
Dearest Sam: You are so right, "the face of hope never masquerades in forlorn visages". Congratulations on your win with this wonderful work of art. Be Blessed, Neva
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/18/2022 12:00:00 PM
Hi Neva! Hope just can't contain itself just like Jesus could probably never make a wheel that wasn't a perfect circle. Thank you so much for your note of congratulations and your lovely compliment! Sending you many blessings!
Date: 2/16/2022 11:22:00 AM
BIG congrats Sam on your podium win. You always shine in your vocabulary. An excellent write.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/18/2022 11:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay! I do love playing with words and attempting to be a wordsmith. Your use of words always inspires me and I take your note as a great compliment! Sending you many blessings.
Date: 2/16/2022 9:25:00 AM
So enjoyed this Sam. Your vision is powerful and presentation convincing! Lonna
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/16/2022 10:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Lonna. For me to ponder hope is to remain in its influence, live in its amazing ability and power blotting out darkness and the despondent. So glad you enjoyed it. Sending you blessings. Hope you are doing well.
Date: 2/16/2022 6:55:00 AM
WoW! Sam, Your poem depicts how powerful hope is. It can brighten up the darkest of days. Well done. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day- Alexis
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/16/2022 10:08:00 AM
Hi Alexis! Thank you so much for your gracious message and congratulations! Very much appreciated! I loved this theme as it provided many hours of uplifting pondering! Hope you are having a wonderful day. Blessings to you!
Date: 2/16/2022 1:37:00 AM
Congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/16/2022 10:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Mohan. This was a wonderful contest theme. I think it is a great time to ponder hope and its effect on all of us. So grateful for your placement and sponsorship of this contest! Sending you blessings of hope.
Date: 5/13/2021 10:30:00 PM
A brilliant poem, Sam, deep from the start to the end, congratulations on your win:)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/14/2021 11:34:00 AM
Hi Jo! Thank you so much for your gracious message of congratulations and your visit. As I mentioned to William hope itself seemed to write this poem. Have spent many hours pondering the essence of hope. I guess all that meditating came out in this write. So grateful to you for your message. Blessings of hope to you!
Date: 5/13/2021 4:30:00 PM
Well defined from the start, Sam, "...pity’s piercing banshee sneer", skillfully said and probably one of your best free verse I've read, Fave my friend and congrats as well, Aloha!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/14/2021 11:29:00 AM
Thank you dear friend for your message AND your fav! That is honor enough for me! I truly feel this poem was a gift from hope itself - it just seemed to write itself with one idea flowing into another. So grateful for your always thought-filled messages and clear perspective. Take care. Blessings! Aloha!!
Date: 5/13/2021 4:05:00 PM
Congratulation on your top win Sam, you deserve it; this is by far and to be one of the greatest poems I've ever read. Blessings and regards
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/14/2021 11:22:00 AM
So honored and humbled Laasad! Thank you for your note of congratulations and your wonderful, inspiring message. I cannot tell you the happiness it brings to me. I am so glad this poem reached out to you as it has to me. I thank God for the inspiration! Hope you are well. Sending you blessings of hope and a smile like the one your message put on my face! :)"
Date: 5/13/2021 2:59:00 PM
Wow, what a masterpiece, Sam! I can't believe this wasn't a POTD poem like Vijay's. One of the very best poems I've read for my contest, no doubt. Congrats on your win! Faved.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/14/2021 11:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Edward. Your contest was truly inspirational and invited many moments of engaging pondering and reflecting on what I really believed hope was intrinsically! I am so happy with your placement among such wonderful entries - a true honor along with the honor of your fav. Your themes really draw out the poet's response to them! So grateful for all that you do here on the soup! Already pondering your next "this or that!" Blessings my friend.
Date: 5/6/2021 2:48:00 PM
this is REALLY great writing. I predict a HIGH win for this one. I just did mine as rhyme. It can't even compare.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/7/2021 9:51:00 AM
Hi Andrea! I am so happy you liked this one. It took some pondering. I kept resisting the idea that hope could be forlorn! That is just not hope's intrinsic personality! Had a chance to read your stunning entry! It is wonderful. I know it will do well. Thank you for your message filled with hope and light! Blessings and a hug.
Date: 5/6/2021 1:03:00 PM
So darkly tragic, yet also holds a lifeline of hope, I agree that one should let go of pity and strive to climb the mountain towards the light, this is just amazing!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/7/2021 9:47:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend! Agreed! I just kept thinking that the essential nature of hope is eternal possibility - always thinking creatively, always seeking a new perception or solution. Forlorn hope became an oxymoron. Your wonderful messages are always words of hope for me. Thank you! Sending you light and hope!
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