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Titanic - Fare There's Well Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Tom Woody. Date Written: 01/14/2024

Impending Doom

The end is nigh.
As the sun goes down 
on my life aboard a Titanic-like ship,
infinitesimal time 
is being sucked into death's vacuum.
Amid all the frenzy 
and anguished screams,
a fiddler still carries on 
with devil-may-care nonchalance.
He has accepted his fate,
but I'm in a race against time.
How much is left?
How much time 
to regurgitate 
all the things I've long digested?
The suppressed words
deep within me
that has rotted in abeyance?
How much time is left 
to vomit all these unexpressed words 
upon family and friends?
Will I finish in time 
saying my final goodbyes 
and expressing 
how I truly feel to all and sundry?
Making apologies 
for all slights I've ever caused? 
Do I even bother visiting 
regrets of unfinished dreams
or mulling over life not fully lived?
After all, these are slowly drowning with me.
All hope is gone, 
but I do know one thing,
I shall make peace with the Lord,
praying that he has mercy 
on my soul.
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January 15, 2024 at 12:12 PM
This is an excellent take on the theme of the contest..
Ibeh Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 5:10 PM
Thank you very much, SO:-)
Empress Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 7:59 AM
Dear EI this is so very realistic and soul hitting how you’ve painted imagery and written on this subject. So vivid that i almost felt that regurgitation ah! You are so talented. I love the ending the most! Powerful! I bet tom would love this. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light alwYs
Ibeh Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 10:53 AM
Thank you very much for the awesome feedback and lovely visit, Inky:-) It's always a delight to hear from you, my friend.
Pandit Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 6:16 AM
I felt the emotions and turmoil of heart and mind that churn in final goodbye. The ending is so true to life when facing such a tragedy.
Ibeh Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 7:34 AM
As always, thank you for the wonderful feedback and visit, Vijay.
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