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Titanic - Fare There's Well Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Tom Woody. Date Written: 01/14/2024

The end is nigh. As the sun goes down on my life aboard a Titanic-like ship, infinitesimal time is being sucked into death's vacuum. Amid all the frenzy and anguished screams, a fiddler still carries on with devil-may-care nonchalance. He has accepted his fate, but I'm in a race against time. How much is left? How much time to regurgitate all the things I've long digested? The suppressed words deep within me that has rotted in abeyance? How much time is left to vomit all these unexpressed words upon family and friends? Will I finish in time saying my final goodbyes and expressing how I truly feel to all and sundry? Making apologies for all slights I've ever caused? Do I even bother visiting regrets of unfinished dreams or mulling over life not fully lived? After all, these are slowly drowning with me. All hope is gone, but I do know one thing, I shall make peace with the Lord, praying that he has mercy on my soul.

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Date: 1/16/2024 7:01:00 PM
This was a top ten Edward. Seriously. You asked all the right questions. Thanks for participating
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/17/2024 4:16:00 AM
You're welcome, Tom. I had fun writing for your contest. Wonderful theme!
Date: 1/15/2024 12:12:00 PM
This is an excellent take on the theme of the contest..
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/15/2024 5:10:00 PM
Thank you very much, SO:-)
Date: 1/15/2024 7:59:00 AM
Dear EI this is so very realistic and soul hitting how you’ve painted imagery and written on this subject. So vivid that i almost felt that regurgitation ah! You are so talented. I love the ending the most! Powerful! I bet tom would love this. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light alwYs
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/15/2024 10:53:00 AM
Thank you very much for the awesome feedback and lovely visit, Inky:-) It's always a delight to hear from you, my friend.
Date: 1/15/2024 6:16:00 AM
I felt the emotions and turmoil of heart and mind that churn in final goodbye. The ending is so true to life when facing such a tragedy.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/15/2024 7:34:00 AM
As always, thank you for the wonderful feedback and visit, Vijay.

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