Simulacrum


   Scintillating hues disperse on blank canvas,
        electric essence sparks azure palate mauve;
          incandescent lightning leads to the ballroom--
                       of galactic blaze.

   Vivacious seagulls draped in white fly afar,
      sing to forlorn sandcastles on tranquil shore;
        breathtaking notes vibrate subdued strings of breeze--
                   pearly mist of harps.

      Inhaling sultry waves of hot topanga,
          I flicker with burning golden lantern wick;
            awaiting tides adorned with velvet mirage--
                     your silk memories.

    Moonbeams rejuvenate my drowning desires,
         I write your name on sand to be washed away;
           your halo descends to embrace me with love--
                    on my yearning pier.



June 11, 2020
Pick-A-Title, Vol 19 - 4 Sapphic Stanzas - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Title Chosen: Simulacrum

~Winner: 1st Place
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Pandit Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 6:49 AM
Superb vocabulary, as always my friend..I write your name on sand to be washed away..A splendid write deserving of the first place..BIG congrats, Aditi.
Kerr Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 1:56 AM
Congratulations Aditi, A well deserved first place podium award for this majestic work. Howard
Watt Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 9:37 PM
All the ocean images speak to me, Aditi. It is perhaps my favorite place to be. Your poetry flows so smooth and deep. "awaiting tides adorned with velvet mirage-- your silk memories". Gorgeous. Congrats on your top win in Sapphic. Blessings ~ John
Hamilton Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 6:03 AM
This is another testament to your great talent Aditi, congrats on your top win, I must save this one!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 6:34 PM
Mesmerizing as always, Aditi, your words drifts in imagery and my compliments on your well deserving win -- Aloha~@William
Inman Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 5:32 PM
Way to go Aditi, lovely write.
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 4:32 PM
your pen is golden Aditi, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 3:42 PM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" Enjoy your win and day...............
Ibeh Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 10:19 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your first place win in my contest! This is an absolute gem, Aditi:-) lt's going into my faves!
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 21, 2020 at 10:49 PM
Congrats on your win! Top again!! Nice to be back on soup after the brief server eclipse!
Kauffman Avatar
July 21, 2020 at 9:39 PM
Congratulations my dear friend. One vibrant image flowing from the previous one. Enjoyed this very much. Blessings and hugs!
Soni Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 9:09 AM
This is a definite win, Aditi. Best of luck in the contest. Rashi
Mishra Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 1:57 AM
Blessed by your encouraging words Rashi. Much love :)
Agustin Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 7:30 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this, and for sharing your poetic gift and talent. God bless you.
Mishra Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 8:33 AM
Glad you love my words Beata! Thank you for your blessings. Much love :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 2:28 AM
Just Superb! You are gifted! Keep writing these wonderful poems. You have painted a brilliant picture here.
Mishra Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 7:17 AM
Thank you for your encouraging words Krish! God bless you :)
Daniel Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 1:08 AM
Wow! Mindblowing brilliance I find in your pen,Aditi, it just flows ever so sweetly:)
Mishra Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 1:42 AM
Thank you for your loving words Jo. God bless you :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 6:04 PM
I am touched by the emotion and imagery of your lines, Aditi! I'm terrible with meter so I dont think I will attempt an entry for this contest, but I'm sure your beautiful poem will be a winner. Love and Blessings, Rhonda xx
Mishra Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 12:26 AM
Blessed by your words of love and appreciation Rhonda. Thanky you for your kind words. I wish you write one for this. I believe you will create a beautiful muse. Love and blessings :)
Mcintosh Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 11:00 AM
Such beautiful verses that capture the heart. Warm and delicious and delicate and so many other tantalizing adjectives. I love your words. God bless you with much love, Gina
Mishra Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 11:23 AM
So glad you loved my words Gina. Thank you for your kind and gracious words of appreciation. Blessings and love :)
Michael Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 9:27 AM
Certain not imagination...maybe a revelation of some sort... I like the style of the write
Mishra Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 9:49 AM
Thank you for your gracious words of appreciation Michael :) Blessings
Chutani Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 9:13 AM
Great imagery. Will beat one and all, any day. Yet to write my muse. Have been thinking of this title only. After reading this, donot know if I can. Best. Mohan
Mishra Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 9:48 AM
I am sure your pen will compose a beautiful melody Mohan. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation :)
Mcgee Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 8:45 AM
Wonderful words paint this poem and brings it to life. I love it.
Mishra Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 9:47 AM
Glad you love it Jeanne. Blessings and love. Thank you :)
Warrior Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 8:43 AM
Superb penmanship Aditi...a top winner in my court...best wishes...^WW^ :o)
Mishra Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 9:47 AM
Thank you for your gracious words of appreciation Wingster :) Blessings.
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