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Simulacrum

Scintillating hues disperse on blank canvas, electric essence sparks azure palate mauve; incandescent lightning leads to the ballroom-- of galactic blaze. Vivacious seagulls draped in white fly afar, sing to forlorn sandcastles on tranquil shore; breathtaking notes vibrate subdued strings of breeze-- pearly mist of harps. Inhaling sultry waves of hot topanga, I flicker with burning golden lantern wick; awaiting tides adorned with velvet mirage-- your silk memories. Moonbeams rejuvenate my drowning desires, I write your name on sand to be washed away; your halo descends to embrace me with love-- on my yearning pier. June 11, 2020 Pick-A-Title, Vol 19 - 4 Sapphic Stanzas - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Title Chosen: Simulacrum ~Winner: 1st Place

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Date: 7/27/2020 6:49:00 AM
Superb vocabulary, as always my friend..I write your name on sand to be washed away..A splendid write deserving of the first place..BIG congrats, Aditi.
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Date: 7/26/2020 1:56:00 AM
Congratulations Aditi, A well deserved first place podium award for this majestic work. Howard
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Date: 7/24/2020 9:37:00 PM
All the ocean images speak to me, Aditi. It is perhaps my favorite place to be. Your poetry flows so smooth and deep. "awaiting tides adorned with velvet mirage-- your silk memories". Gorgeous. Congrats on your top win in Sapphic. Blessings ~ John
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Date: 7/23/2020 6:03:00 AM
This is another testament to your great talent Aditi, congrats on your top win, I must save this one!
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Date: 7/22/2020 6:34:00 PM
Mesmerizing as always, Aditi, your words drifts in imagery and my compliments on your well deserving win -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/22/2020 5:32:00 PM
Way to go Aditi, lovely write.
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Date: 7/22/2020 4:32:00 PM
your pen is golden Aditi, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/22/2020 3:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" Enjoy your win and day...............
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Date: 7/22/2020 10:19:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your first place win in my contest! This is an absolute gem, Aditi:-) lt's going into my faves!
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Date: 7/21/2020 10:49:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Top again!! Nice to be back on soup after the brief server eclipse!
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Date: 7/21/2020 9:39:00 PM
Congratulations my dear friend. One vibrant image flowing from the previous one. Enjoyed this very much. Blessings and hugs!
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Date: 6/19/2020 9:09:00 AM
This is a definite win, Aditi. Best of luck in the contest. Rashi
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Date: 6/20/2020 1:57:00 AM
Blessed by your encouraging words Rashi. Much love :)
Date: 6/12/2020 7:30:00 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this, and for sharing your poetic gift and talent. God bless you.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/12/2020 8:33:00 AM
Glad you love my words Beata! Thank you for your blessings. Much love :)
Date: 6/12/2020 2:28:00 AM
Just Superb! You are gifted! Keep writing these wonderful poems. You have painted a brilliant picture here.
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Date: 6/12/2020 7:17:00 AM
Thank you for your encouraging words Krish! God bless you :)
Date: 6/12/2020 1:08:00 AM
Wow! Mindblowing brilliance I find in your pen,Aditi, it just flows ever so sweetly:)
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Date: 6/12/2020 1:42:00 AM
Thank you for your loving words Jo. God bless you :)
Date: 6/11/2020 6:04:00 PM
I am touched by the emotion and imagery of your lines, Aditi! I'm terrible with meter so I dont think I will attempt an entry for this contest, but I'm sure your beautiful poem will be a winner. Love and Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/12/2020 12:26:00 AM
Blessed by your words of love and appreciation Rhonda. Thanky you for your kind words. I wish you write one for this. I believe you will create a beautiful muse. Love and blessings :)
Date: 6/11/2020 11:00:00 AM
Such beautiful verses that capture the heart. Warm and delicious and delicate and so many other tantalizing adjectives. I love your words. God bless you with much love, Gina
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/11/2020 11:23:00 AM
So glad you loved my words Gina. Thank you for your kind and gracious words of appreciation. Blessings and love :)
Date: 6/11/2020 9:27:00 AM
Certain not imagination...maybe a revelation of some sort... I like the style of the write
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Date: 6/11/2020 9:49:00 AM
Thank you for your gracious words of appreciation Michael :) Blessings
Date: 6/11/2020 9:13:00 AM
Great imagery. Will beat one and all, any day. Yet to write my muse. Have been thinking of this title only. After reading this, donot know if I can. Best. Mohan
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/11/2020 9:48:00 AM
I am sure your pen will compose a beautiful melody Mohan. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation :)
Date: 6/11/2020 8:45:00 AM
Wonderful words paint this poem and brings it to life. I love it.
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Date: 6/11/2020 9:47:00 AM
Glad you love it Jeanne. Blessings and love. Thank you :)
Date: 6/11/2020 8:43:00 AM
Superb penmanship Aditi...a top winner in my court...best wishes...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 6/11/2020 9:47:00 AM
Thank you for your gracious words of appreciation Wingster :) Blessings.

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