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Example for my contest...This is my first try at this form, I do hope it's right...lol 

From her womb...come birth
A child...a new life 
His first sound...a cry 
His first sight.... his mom 
His first feel...mom's arms
 
His breath...so soft 
Small toes...wee feet 
His nose...so cute 
His ears, he hears... 

Love you, son 
Lift your eyes 
See the light 

Come ere
To life 

Child

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/26/2019 1:54:00 AM
This is wonderful, Charlie, and a great form - I just noticed that it received Poem of the Day as well - congratulations! I have NEVER tried this form but just did, and I have to say, it was a LOT of fun, and I'm going to write more, (and maybe my next contest). Thank you for introducing me to it, my friend - I hope I do it some justice, as you have here. Blessings! :-)
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Date: 1/19/2019 3:24:00 PM
Great to see you getting potd... Congrats.
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Date: 1/20/2019 8:20:00 AM
Thank you, SO :)
Date: 1/19/2019 3:18:00 PM
I love this tender poem Charlie. Congratulations on your deserving POTD honors. : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/20/2019 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, Connie :)
Date: 1/18/2019 8:23:00 PM
What a lovely diminished hexaverse, Charlie. Congratulations on your POTD -- so well deserved. And this is a fine example for your contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 1/18/2019 10:04:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn. Hoping to see yours :) Hugs
Date: 1/18/2019 6:03:00 PM
Hi Charlie, dropping by with my congratulations on your poem of the day honour with this wonderful poem. have a wonderful Saturday....Mike.
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Date: 1/18/2019 10:02:00 PM
Hey Mike, thank you for your kind words and your visit. Have a nice weekend my friend!
Date: 1/18/2019 5:28:00 PM
Charlie, congratulations on having your sweet poem selected as Poem of the Day, enjoy the honor ~
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Date: 1/18/2019 10:00:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. These don't come around that often for me, so much enjoying the ride. :)
Date: 1/18/2019 4:37:00 PM
Awe, Charlie. This is so sweet and tender. Beautiful moments of a mother and her child. Life! Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 1/18/2019 10:00:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy. So happy to warm your heart! :)
Date: 1/18/2019 4:36:00 PM
Hi Charlie, You have captured the feeling of a proud mom upon the arrival of her baby boy! Excellent job. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:58:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis. And for your kind words :)
Date: 1/18/2019 4:23:00 PM
Nicely done, Charles, congratulations on POTD... Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:57:00 PM
Thank you, Eve :) Hugs!
Date: 1/18/2019 4:13:00 PM
Awesome, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:57:00 PM
Thank you, Tania :)
Date: 1/18/2019 11:29:00 AM
CONGRATS. Best Wishes.
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:57:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha
Date: 1/18/2019 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. A truly deserving one. :) Sweet and simple. :)
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:56:00 PM
Thank you, Swetha :)
Date: 1/18/2019 9:37:00 AM
Sweet - Congratulations!
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:56:00 PM
Thank you, SW :)
Date: 1/18/2019 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD! :)
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:56:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi :)
Date: 1/18/2019 8:19:00 AM
Just beautiful! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:55:00 PM
Thank you, Kim :)
Date: 1/18/2019 8:14:00 AM
Wonderful! Congratulations on POTD Charlie! xomo :)
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:55:00 PM
Thank you, Mo :) xocm
Date: 1/18/2019 7:54:00 AM
Congrats Charles on poem of the day..so well deserved!
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:55:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay
Date: 1/18/2019 7:52:00 AM
Charles my friend...Awesome! DH...no greater love than a Mother & child...Congrats!!! on POTD! ...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:54:00 PM
Thank you, WW. I agree with you on that...Love & peace!
Date: 1/18/2019 7:27:00 AM
This is such a beautiful POTD, Congratulations!
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:53:00 PM
Thank you, Mike. And for your kind words!
Date: 1/18/2019 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD honors, well done...
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:52:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie
Date: 1/18/2019 6:53:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Charles..
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:52:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph
Date: 1/18/2019 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations Charles on POTD!
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:51:00 PM
Thank you, Wren
Date: 1/18/2019 6:00:00 AM
So proud to see this excellent write win POTD! Congratulations, Charles!:-) Well-deserved!
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:51:00 PM
Wow, was I surprised when I saw this. Thanks again, Edward, I couldn't have done it without your help :) Much obliged...Charlie
Date: 1/18/2019 4:29:00 AM
- Lovely poem, Charlie - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:48:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise :) Hugs Charlie
Date: 1/18/2019 1:24:00 AM
A form I've never heard of ( I'm still learning lol) Congratulations on POTD Charlie. Tom.
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:48:00 PM
Thank you, Tom (As I am too...lol)
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