Example for my contest...This is my first try at this form, I do hope it's right...lol
From her womb...come birth A child...a new life His first sound...a cry His first sight.... his mom His first feel...mom's arms His breath...so soft Small toes...wee feet His nose...so cute His ears, he hears... Love you, son Lift your eyes See the light Come ere To life Child
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