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You kill me And I come back. You kill me again And I come back again I don't know Why. Am I the problem? Am I the cause? Am I the affliction, the recurring pain? You kill me And I come back. You kill me again And I come back again The earth rumbles, Crumbles, Sending water surging, Car Sirens blaring, Dogs barking Cursing the chill streets' air. You stare A still moment; You're Home. Thrill, tears of joy fill, Runs down both you and I cheeks. Ill, how do I respond? I don't understand What is happening. The guide is the sun, What was behind It wasn't meant for me. Left behind, alone. Alone out in the darkness As the tempest speaks, Drenching Down to the muddy ground Pooling With nowhere else to go. I shudder as I walk away, Drowning In deathless sadness. In torture By your glaring eyes; I lie down weaken. Again, I die. You kill me And I come back. You kill me again And I come back again 11/2/2020

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Date: 11/21/2020 1:32:00 AM
The past and what we leave behind, or what or who leaves us is usually never meant to be, we just can't accept this truth. Good job!
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Date: 11/16/2020 7:00:00 AM
A powerful write Eve, a testament to your resilience!
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Date: 11/15/2020 1:53:00 AM
Excellent piece dear Eve..I love the dark theme of this poem. More power on your ink!
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Date: 11/10/2020 5:10:00 PM
Well written piece, Eve. Some of it I can relate to. Hope you have a good night :)
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Date: 11/5/2020 5:28:00 PM
Sometimes one's desire is so great for someone, someone's hopes are have soared so high, that he/she will endure anything for another chance. It sounds sick, but I, for one, get it. A moving write, Eve. ~ Gershon
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Date: 11/4/2020 12:55:00 AM
Dark and deep, Eve:)
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Date: 11/2/2020 7:31:00 PM
message from nette oncluad: standing tall against all odds...impressive, eve.. could you comment on my phantasmagoria poem?.. i think there is something wrong with my settings, members can;t get through.. thanks and huggs
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Date: 11/2/2020 7:21:00 PM
Brilliant piece about resilience, Eve:-) Thoroughly enjoyed this! Faved.
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Date: 11/2/2020 8:51:00 AM
Very deep dark and sad, it is so unusual for you to write in this style, hope you are ok:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/2/2020 7:36:00 AM
This is full of emotion, I wrote about depression also.. It is a silent killer and a condition many do not understand unless they have gone through it...
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