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Dodoitsu Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Ink Empress Date: 10/19/2023

All of Life's Roadblocks

A mountain of any height;
  Roadblocks that life hurl your way,
Plow through them and forge ahead.
               Keep persevering!
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October 24, 2023 at 12:50 PM
Great arrangement of words for this form.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ibeh Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 3:34 PM
Thank you very much, SO:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 5:47 AM
Difficult to plow through a mountain except by faith and prayer and yes, persevering! Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 7:18 AM
True indeed! Thank you very much, Kim:-)
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October 24, 2023 at 5:02 AM
Keep persevering- what an inspiring and uplifting message that empowers us to keep sailing with courage and resilience no matter how dark the onyx oceans may be! A very well deserved win for the contest, heartiest congratulations dear Edward~ :)
Ibeh Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 7:17 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and visit, Hiya:-)
Empress Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 2:31 AM
This is such a needed message that you’ve passed on so effortlessly and in such a poetic manner whilst sticking to syllables and keeping your lines intact. I felt like these words speak to my soul as i read your eloquent lines, and reminded me to keep persevering despite all any roadblock of emotions. And i hope many will read this too and feel empowered and inspired! Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS on winning in my contest! Well deserved
Ibeh Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 7:16 AM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, Inky:-) Most obliged.
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