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 Date written: 09/01/2023

I'm solitary, roaming The American southwest desert; Heaving my bulky body - Covered with bead-like scales Of black and yellow - Across hot sands and rocks In search of prey. I'm a nocturnal, Cold-blooded lizard. I flick out my forked poisonous tongue To taste the air like snakes do. Do not confuse me With a Komodo Dragon, I'm a much smaller reptile, And I wear a different skin. My tail is rather short. My razor sharp claws are used To dig burrows and unearth Buried eggs of tortoises, snakes, And other lizards. My diet include small crawlies Such as rodents, frogs, meerkats, etc. I don't mind birds and their young! I'm a Gila Monster

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Date: 9/4/2023 6:58:00 AM
Gila means crazy in malaysian language. So your title really drew me in. I really love the darkness and the depth of your words here. Especially “ im a nocturnal cold blooded lizard” and “ razor sharp claws” soul hitting, descriptive and powerful write: love this as always you are truly a talented poet
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/4/2023 7:15:00 AM
Thank very much much for the wonderful feedback, Inky:-) Most obliged.

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