Reverse Graffiti

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Reverse Graffiti Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Suzette Richards. Date written: 04/08/2024


w  h  i  s  p e  r  e  d...
              illuminating secrets,
cosmic symphony
                       in twilight;
                                 stars bow...
    e n c h a n t r e s s
                        bends 
                                will.

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Terry Miller

Date: 5/7/2024 3:13:00 AM

A beautiful extraction (or should that be erasure) of words to reveal this delight, congratulations

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/7/2024 4:42:00 AM

Thank you very much, Terry:-)

Crystol Woods

Date: 5/5/2024 9:12:00 AM

I could picture this... Great choices! Congratulations

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/7/2024 4:41:00 AM

Thank you very much, Crystol:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2024 1:03:00 PM

LOVELY! i really hope to get on this one soon!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/9/2024 1:09:00 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea:-)

Tonye George

Date: 4/8/2024 5:44:00 PM

All these beautiful dances happen at night and it makes it more astounding. I love the last line. "Enchantress bends will." There's nothing a siren damsel won't get. From her allure to his eyes. Her wishes are birthed.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/8/2024 5:50:00 PM

Thank you very much for the lovely visit, Tonye:-)

Ink Empress

Date: 4/8/2024 11:48:00 AM

How cosmically alluring this is dear EI! I love it! Cosmic symphony of words scattered in the most artistic manner! As stars bow, the way youv personified them is clever. Pleasure reading this. A fave for its ethereal beauty

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/8/2024 11:55:00 AM

Thank you very much for the marvelous feedback and the fave, Inky:-) Most appreciated, my friend.