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Reverse Graffiti Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Suzette Richards. Date written: 04/08/2024

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w  h  i  s  p e  r  e  d...
              illuminating secrets,
cosmic symphony
                       in twilight;
                                 stars bow...
    e n c h a n t r e s s
                        bends 
                                will.
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Miller Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 3:13 AM
A beautiful extraction (or should that be erasure) of words to reveal this delight, congratulations
Ibeh Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 4:42 AM
Thank you very much, Terry:-)
Woods Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 9:12 AM
I could picture this... Great choices! Congratulations
Ibeh Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 4:41 AM
Thank you very much, Crystol:-)
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 1:03 PM
LOVELY! i really hope to get on this one soon!
Ibeh Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 1:09 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea:-)
George Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 5:44 PM
All these beautiful dances happen at night and it makes it more astounding. I love the last line. "Enchantress bends will." There's nothing a siren damsel won't get. From her allure to his eyes. Her wishes are birthed.
Ibeh Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 5:50 PM
Thank you very much for the lovely visit, Tonye:-)
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 11:48 AM
How cosmically alluring this is dear EI! I love it! Cosmic symphony of words scattered in the most artistic manner! As stars bow, the way youv personified them is clever. Pleasure reading this. A fave for its ethereal beauty
Ibeh Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 11:55 AM
Thank you very much for the marvelous feedback and the fave, Inky:-) Most appreciated, my friend.
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