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(Rewrite of one of the first poems I wrote here at the Soup)


          YOU ...

                               are a mystery, a spellbinding novel,
                       each new chapter more enigmatic than the last.
                I read you with my fingertips,
           pausing to regard the inches, to savor each,
       like a meaty word that I turn over in my thoughts,
    in careful consideration ... of its flavor.
  With the gentle brush of my palm,
 one precious span of your opaline flesh is added unto the next,
inch linked to dynamic inch ...
like the flowing, voltaic sentences of a master wordsmith.
The journey of each phrase of your contours
 bespeaks to my core a torrid tale of longing, pure ...
  a hunger to delve ever further into the sultry, shapely, sinewy saga
    that your alluring body whispers to me -
       whispers and sighs, with its subtle, spicy shivers:
           to realize the destination of this epic journey,
                to unravel the mysterious and beguiling narrative
                       that your anatomy conveys to my core,
                               the sublime, licentious and seductive story that is ...

          YOU.




Submitted on November 14, 2018
To the "Mid November 2018 Any Form Or None" Poetry Contest
Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/5/2019 10:13:00 AM
Breath takingly beautiful write Greg.
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Date: 5/2/2019 12:12:00 PM
Who could forget this beauty. I commented on it I am certain because I remember it and it's shape. This has been happening to me a lot and to others too. Our comments don't show up as if they were removed because I check after I post. ?? Anyway Greg...this is exquisite!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 5/2/2019 5:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie, I so appreciate the kind and heartfelt comments! It has happened to me as well ... in all my time at Poetry Soup I have only removed TWO comments, and that's because they were offensive. I would never remove anyone's comment otherwise, even negative ones, (as long as they aren't rude). I think there's some kind of glitch in the system. Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 12/13/2018 6:53:00 PM
Yes, exactly how the skin should be touched, softly- as the being aches for more. How moments should unfold- when savoring the sweetness of every curve. This is so beautiful, so sensual and very romantic. Simply breathtaking. ~ Brandy
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 12/13/2018 11:28:00 PM
Such a lovely and thoughtful comment, Brandy, I thank you so very much, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! Your poem made me think of that story, and I remembered I had one that was similar. It's a fun metaphor to dabble with! Blessings, Dear Friend! :-) <3
Date: 11/22/2018 4:05:00 PM
Happy to be back with well deserved congrats on your top win, Gregory.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 12/13/2018 11:26:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line! :-)
Date: 11/18/2018 11:25:00 AM
Your poems keep filling up my fav list, and this is yet another addition!. Masterfully crafted, Greg!:-) Congrats on your win!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 11/18/2018 5:37:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Edward, and I so greatly appreciate the wonderful comments ... blessings, My Poet Brother! :-)
Date: 11/10/2018 1:24:00 AM
Now... wow! Just ...wow! P.S. Another freaking FAV!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 11/14/2018 2:01:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Carole, that's so nice of you! Blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 11/5/2018 12:04:00 PM
This very nicely encapsulates how I read and why I have never been interested in "speed reading". "I read you with my fingertips" is lovely.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 11/6/2018 2:21:00 AM
Very kind of you, Jim, and I greatly appreciate your thoughtful comments ... totally agree about taking time "reading" - gotta let those "words" sink in, and enjoy each like the tender morsel it is. Blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 11/4/2018 11:07:00 AM
Beautiful then and more beautiful now. How do you do it?
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 11/6/2018 2:19:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sunlite, I so appreciate the kindness! I get lucky once-in-a-while ... even a broken clock is right twice a day, so I figure if I write enough poems, I'm bound by percentages to "hit" every-so-often, haha! Blessings my friend! ;-) <3
Date: 11/4/2018 8:51:00 AM
What a beauty in every way, Gregory. BRAVO. A definite FAVE for me.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 11/6/2018 2:17:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line, I'm so pleased you liked this one, Dear Poet! :-) <3