Bitesize Poem No. 82 Poetry Contest, sponsored by Line Gauthier. Date written: 02/12/2024
Nearly on the mountain's summit. To plant his "I did it!" flag, Only to be flushed down By fate's rumbling avalanche. Nevertheless, keep your pity; He's halfway up on second try.
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