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Bitesize Poem No. 82 Poetry Contest, sponsored by Line Gauthier. Date written: 02/12/2024
Nearly on the mountain's summit.
To plant his "I did it!" flag,
Only to be flushed down
By fate's rumbling avalanche.
Nevertheless, keep your pity;
He's halfway up on second try.
Copyright © Edward Ibeh | Year Posted 2024
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