Silhouette

Out walking on the beach alone, 
Waves breaking with a somber tone. 
I was only a stumble 
From cracking up and crashing down. 
Old driftwood and a weathered shell; 
Lone inmate in a private hell. 
I'd been telling myself 
I should take my business out of town.
 
Bad karma plucked a sour string. 
No music, just the same damn thing. 
I'd been singin’ the blues 
With a heavy feeling in my gut. 
Faith, charity, but not much hope; 
All tangled in the hangin’ rope. 
You can't open a window 
If someone's gone and nailed it shut.
 
Just then she came and took my hand, 
Said, "Got a minute, sailor man." 
Her assertive approach 
Caught me unprepared and way off guard. 
She rattled me with sunset eyes, 
Full frontal, wearing no disguise,
Her horizon aflame 
With a sexy charm that hit me hard.
 
She teased me with her silhouette. 
I smiled and said, "I'll see your bet."
It was getting on dark, 
So I took the hint and got undressed. 
I'm sure we musta broke some law. 
No telling what the seagulls saw. 
If they’d called the police 
We'd be lucky to avoid arrest.
  
Some risks aren't really worth the chance. 
Sometimes it doesn't pay to dance, 
But the answer that night 
Was to call her on a double dare. 
I'll gamble, though I never bluff. 
She's coy, but then I dig that stuff. 
It's enough to get lucky 
When you wager on a winning pair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Inman Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 9:19 AM
What sweet memory you have stirred.
Gorelick Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 1:57 PM
I was sure this was my life's story until the sunset eyed vixen entered the scene. Good going "sailor man!"
Ibeh Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 12:44 PM
Back with congratulations for a well deserved POTD, Michael!
Eslinger Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 10:02 PM
Good to meet you thru this moving poem, pulled me right into the scene from the shells to the chance you sex.she could have been me 41 years ago before my devout marriage, when I was a hippie :) yr an incredible scene-setter & I loved the sunset comparison descriptions to her, & the plays with gambling references..
Kalavik Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 4:21 AM
Thank you.
Sands Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Congratulations for this great POTD Michael :)
Kalavik Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 2:36 PM
Thank you.
La France Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 10:32 AM
Michael, wonderful writing and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Kalavik Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 2:36 PM
Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. No "singin’ the blues" on this wonderful/fun write. Have a blessed day.......................
Kalavik Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 2:36 PM
Thank you.
Rone Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 10:04 AM
There is so much I loved about this poem; the direct confessions, the sly double entendres and the faith hope and charty reference that I imagine was missed by some. I too had a similar inspiration (Beach Child). Congracts on the POTD.
Kalavik Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 2:36 PM
Thank you.
Nicole Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 9:53 AM
*A teasing silhouette and sexy charm* Oh my ! It sounds like she had you under her spell. This is beautiful, romantic and playful- passionate and sensual too. Your thoughts bring a smile. Congratulations Michael, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Kalavik Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 2:36 PM
Thank you.
Hankins Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 9:30 AM
Michael, I knew that very soon your poetry would be recognized. It is marvelous and I enjoy it so much. Back to say CONGRATULATIONS on P.O.T.D.! I'm hoping this honor will introduce you to many more readers.
Kalavik Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 2:37 PM
Thank you.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 8:21 AM
That was some silhouette Michael, a wonderful lyric poem, congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
Kalavik Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 2:37 PM
Thank you.
Peck Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 7:46 AM
Very engrossing story! I enjoyed reading your poem. Congratulations on POTD.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 6:07 AM
Cool poem, Michael. Kudos on POTD! Love and more love always.
Kalavik Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 7:46 AM
Thank you.
Balasubramanian Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 4:12 AM
Great story kept me engrossed till end. Amazing talent. Congratulations on your well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour and day
Kalavik Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 4:53 AM
Thank you.
Cunningham Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 1:27 AM
Enjoyed your smooth flowing lyric Michael, congratulations on POTD. Tom
Kalavik Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 4:53 AM
Thank you.
Hankins Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 6:17 PM
Another riveting piece of writing. I love the way you wrap a story in rhyme and keep it flowing through your stanzas. Great work, Michael.
Kalavik Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 6:25 PM
Thank you.
Ibeh Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 3:22 PM
Mesmerizing write, Michael! Yeah, this one's a keeper. Faved.
Kalavik Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 3:54 PM
Many thanks.
Woodrow Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 1:16 PM
Very nice I especially like the ending line :)
Kalavik Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Thank you.
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