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Urban Slab

some level of falling from grace happens in slab city
its twisted humanity
when kindness stops being nornal
when green crusaders are dismissed, unseen
like burying waste in landfill

city of slab-stick
where we live normal lives within shuttered malls
affluence superimposed on poverty
can anything mellow us
with nature clotted under sprawl

here
within plated walls 
breeding, feeding, receding 
unable to bend the city to one's own wishing
to carry on with things just as they are
slabs pinned to the ceiling of mind

sometimes shutters open
to sun-dappled streaks on slab walkways
what are we to make of the dandelion in the crack?
a dark energy blooming between comfort and chaos

maybe we can piggyback on the hope of others
when small acts radiate
like children who empty their piggy-banks to charity
or laugh in summers of safe places

towers girdle the city 
midst what we crave for but can't always name
in our stash of consumer baubles 
urges like a swollen river
our weak stock options that never find a ladder

in the meantime we tread on  -  hungrily 


Copyright © Brian Sambourne | Year Posted 2025

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Date: 9/21/2026 5:31:00 AM

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Date: 9/19/2026 10:43:00 AM

I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Date: 6/20/2026 4:01:00 PM

I understand the city in your poem as an extended metaphor for our civilized world. It captures our painful struggle to hold on to our humanity. There are so many powerful lines! And in the end, you offer hope in a childhood innocence of charity and laughter. This is a beautifully written poem. Well done!
Date: 1/8/2026 12:30:00 PM

“maybe we can piggyback on the hope of others when small acts radiate like children who empty their piggy-banks to charity or laugh in summers of safe places” Love these lines! I sent you a soupmail and a email.
Date: 4/20/2025 5:09:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Date: 3/18/2025 1:28:00 AM

Whenever I think of the word concrete I think of architectural brutalism, the UK's choice for the reconstruction of buildings post war, a certain coldness by association and attach it to describing a world and its people right now who appear lost, powerless and without a voice or soul. Elements of my own thinking appear as I read this wonderful write Bryan. I love how you add flickers of light and hope for the future through the kindness of children. A winner in my books contest or not. Cheers - Gary
Date: 3/13/2025 7:48:00 PM

profound, unique write dear poet.
Date: 3/13/2025 3:14:00 PM

To me, this portrayed the darker and sad part of humanity. I'm sure that was your intention SO you succeeded. I don't know anything about contest judges and I will also admit, I don't know what urban slab stands for exactly - not YET, I'll look it up, anyway, I'm trying to say I think you did a mighty fine word portrait ... CayCay

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