Live In My Heart, Rent-Free

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Date written: 01/04/2024

Live in my heart, rent-free Now and forever more. Don't stay out in the cold; Make yourself feel at home, For its as good as gold. Live in my heart, rent-free. Don't knock, just come right in To a place very safe, To a place you belong, To a heart that's fail safe. Live in my heart, rent-free. Flow into me, my sweet, Like most gentle of streams. My heart is a refuge; It's where love's bright light gleams. Live in my heart, rent-free. There's enough room for you; Stay as long as you wish! You possess the sole key; There, our love shall flourish.

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Valsa George

Date: 1/11/2024 7:37:00 PM

What a lovely write ! I concur with what SV has stated below. Your poem is an ardent invitation to your sweetheart. I am sure there is enough space in your heart for her and love shall ever flourish there. This sweet poem is sure to go into my FAVE dear Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/12/2024 5:32:00 AM

Thank you very much for the lovely visit, feedback and fave, Valsa!:-) Most obliged.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 1/8/2024 8:46:00 PM

What a magnificently gracious invitation to the one that possesses the sole key. I was smiling from the moment I read the title. There is no way she could refuse such an offer to have such a wonderous place to reside. Another unique poem written so beautifully.

Tom Woody
Date: 1/9/2024 5:39:00 AM

Agreed SSV

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/9/2024 4:03:00 AM

Thank you very much, SV:-) I'm glad you liked it, my friend.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/4/2024 6:22:00 AM

Words that blossom in endearing sentiments. Much enjoyed the voice of your poem, Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/4/2024 6:46:00 AM

Thank you very much, Vijay:-) I appreciate the visit, my friend.