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Colorful Or Chimera Words - Update Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 08/30/2023

Colorful

cornflowers
   are yawning
      sapphire blue
         in a serene meadow.
            a frangipani...

               glistens milk white.
            the wind-stirred trees
         and blades of grass,                     
       youthful green.
    rays of the midday sun,

    glorious yellow.
       a vista teeming 
          with breathtaking colors.
             what a blessed day
                the Lord has made!

               as a mockingbird
            parrots a celestial refrain,
        a mantis
      folds its arms
   in prayer of thanks.
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La France Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 11:11 PM
Edward, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the creative layout, Constance
George Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 12:09 AM
Before this beautiful tapestry God has unfolded before us, feasting our eyes with colors and beauty, let us also stay with hands folded in gratitude along with the mantis ! Love the concluding lines-"a mantis folds its hands in prayer of thanks." Beautiful poem and beautiful alignment of words, dear Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 2:35 AM
Thank you very much for the feedback and visit, Valsa:-
Empress Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 2:39 PM
Absolutely stunning: frangipanis never sounded as beautiful as this ever. And the colors so very well articulated. I love the shape and flow of imagery. You have a way with words really: so profound and captivating
Ibeh Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback, compliment and visit, Ink:-) Most obliged.
Pandit Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 6:14 AM
Awesome poetry, Edward. A symphony of colors and sounds bring forth the splendid images-- taking the reader there in real time.
Ibeh Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 10:11 AM
Thank you very much as always, Vijay:-)
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