Lift Somebody's Dawn

Learn from the eagle how to soar with winds
Spanning your wings to conquer tall peaks 
Float hopes high reaching sapphire blue skies
Triumph with your smile as the world goes by

When beset in clutches of troublesome plight
Know that a new dawn always follows night
My child, when it’s your turn, do what’s right
Even a bright sunny day must cede to twilight

If you want things easy, they won't be worth it
Learn to swing ably if you wish to score a hit
When the climb gets hard you must never quit
Things that you regret, you may never repeat

Glint someone’s clouds, be the rainbow on arc
Be the emissary of light for the adrift in dark
Edify your doldrums, be always on your mark
Lift somebody’s dawn, be the sweet song of lark

Walk along humility when tempted by pride 
Learn from those saintly, living lives dignified
Hold your balance or you’ll tumble and fall
Let the mountains teach you how to stand tall

When something goes wrong, do not justify
What’s spurious and superficial, do not glorify
How well you do, rests on how hard you try
When you hear the call of duty, never ask why

Let happy thoughts reign your state of mind
When emotions overwhelm, always choose kind
Spread the wealth of love to help mankind
Be the precious gemstone that is hard to find

Glint someone’s clouds, be the rainbow on arc
Be the emissary of light for the adrift in dark
Edify your doldrums, be always on your mark
Lift somebody’s dawn, be the sweet song of lark


December 21, 2020
Placed 1st: Your advice to the youth poetry contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Placed 5th: Your choice (41) contest by Brian Strand
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Lawrence Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 12:47 PM
So beautiful..insightful...kind and wise. Such wonderful gifts of thought and heart you have penned! Congratulations ! All the best, Susan :)
Pandit Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 12:55 PM
Thank you Susan--much appreciate.
Flood Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 7:29 AM
Fantastic read
Pandit Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 10:09 AM
Thank you...much appreciate.
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January 17, 2021 at 1:53 AM
Absolutely wonderful Vijay, such good advice to carry with one on the journey through life... Belle
Pandit Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 5:54 AM
Appreciate the kind remarks--many thanks, Belle.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 6:03 PM
Congratulations, Vijay! so uplifting! well-deserved top placement.
Pandit Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 5:53 AM
Thank you mala--much appreciate.
Baker Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 12:30 PM
Quite an aphoristic and solid effort---full of very keen imperatives that lift up the soul and heart Very well composed
Pandit Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 1:55 PM
Thank you LeRoy--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Michael Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Good one...Uplifting news.
Pandit Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 9:39 AM
Thank you Arturo.
Downing  Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Hi Vijay, congratulations on being 1st place on the 100 best new poems. It is an amazing piece well deserves its 1st place :)
Pandit Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 5:57 AM
Thank you Akkina. Much appreciate my friend your visit and comments.
Costales Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 10:55 AM
Such a lovely write full of wisdom and inspiring advice not only for the young, but all would profit from it, age regardless. Been away here for a long time, but am so glad to be back to read such great poems here. Congrats.
Pandit Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 12:31 PM
Enjoyed reading your comments Josefina. Much appreciate--many thanks. Welcome back.
Watt Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 11:30 PM
Vijay, your inspiring poem sings of the virtues of hope, wisdom, love, humility and kindness. Bravo to you for this fantastic write. A fave for me, I applaud you for reaching the top of the Best New Poems summit and your top win in Edward's contest. All my best ~ John
Pandit Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 6:34 AM
You are so very kind and much beloved poet on Soup. I am happy to read your comments, John. Many thanks.
Fowler Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 8:06 AM
Stirring and emotional. Sage advice for young minds Vijay. Congratulations on the well-deserved win! Linda
Pandit Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:29 AM
Thank you Linda--much appreciate.
Gilmour Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 7:08 AM
Such wise advice full of hope and inspiration Vijay. You have such a beautiful way of expressing yourself which touches my soul ~ thank you dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Pandit Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:29 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate your kind remarks. Wishing you the very best in 2021.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 2:58 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love how you used the eagle. A wonderful write. Enjoy your win. Today, have joy/blessings....................
Pandit Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:28 AM
Thank you Paula--much appreciate.
Mitra Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 7:07 PM
So So beautiful....Congrats on your Top Win Vijay....Have a awesome New Year :)
Pandit Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 8:30 AM
Much appreciate Carol--many thanks.
Crabtree Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 6:22 PM
Back to read this wonderful poem again, Vijay. Have a great night :)
Pandit Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 8:30 AM
Thank you for the return visit, Angela--much appreciate.
Koplin Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 5:22 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 8:29 AM
Much appreciate, Mark--many thanks.
Y. Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 3:27 PM
Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your high placement. It was well deserved. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 8:29 AM
Thank you for the return visit, Alexis--much appreciate.
Logan Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 3:23 PM
Being a giver who never expects anything in return is great advice. Your use of vocabulary is a gift, and you apply it very well. Congratulations, Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 8:29 AM
Thank you Jenna--much appreciate.
Ibeh Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 11:20 AM
Wow, this is just sublime in every single way! You're a poet's poet, Vijay:-) Instant FAV! Heartiest congratulations on your 1st win in my contest
Pandit Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 2:01 PM
I am honored by your delightful comments, Edward. Much appreciate your vote of approval. Thank you for holding contests. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Balasubramanian Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 2:46 AM
My fave. No wonder it is in top 100 list at high position. Great advice. God bless you. Keep the ink flowing. May you have a wonderful year ahead. Take care.
Pandit Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 6:11 AM
Honored by your FAVE. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Rama. Thank you for your kind feedback. Wishing you the very best in 2021.
May Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 7:53 AM
Sage words, Beautifully written Vijay, Happy New Year to you and family..
Pandit Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate. Wishing you and your family the very best.
Logan Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 7:24 AM
I have been neglectful in reading many poets recently. Yours included, Vijay. How kind is the thought of being someone's lark instead of cawing at them like a crow.
Pandit Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 6:08 AM
Honored by your visit and comments, Jenna. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Proxenos Avatar
December 28, 2020 at 11:13 AM
'How well you do, rests on how hard you try' - how true Vijay, you can only gain and win by the effort you put in. I love your poem, but of course it is written by one of our top poets. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
December 28, 2020 at 3:14 PM
Much appreciate the kind remarks, Jennifer. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Sands Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 5:35 AM
I absolutely love this Lyric Vijay! A FAV for me! What excellent advice, written beautifully :)
Pandit Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 5:40 AM
I am honored by your FAVE, Heidi. Much delighted by your comments. Always a treasure to have your support.
Kannan Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 1:01 AM
This is such an uplifting write... The way you described is so elegant and I also loved the meter and rhymes...So beautifully written...
Pandit Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 5:39 AM
Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.
Dome Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 10:02 AM
Wow this is Sublimely beautiful poetry.Love it. Very well done and visual. true art. a sure winner. Pete.
Pandit Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 12:56 PM
Much appreciate Peter--many thanks.
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