Surreal

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Sanctuary, Soft, Stir, Surreal Words Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 03/05/2024

Stopped at a red light, a motorcycle pulls up next to her She turns her head to the left; agape, frozen in sheer amazement Actor Brad Pitt waits with her; a surreal experience.

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Constance La France

Date: 3/9/2024 2:26:00 PM

Edward, congratulations on your win in my contest, liked your poem, blessings, Constance

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/11/2024 6:47:00 AM

Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, dear Constance;-) Most appreciated.

Tom Woody

Date: 3/8/2024 4:30:00 PM

Lol. Brad Pitt is so yesterday. Now Ryan Gosling... Cute poem

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/11/2024 6:48:00 AM

But women still dig him! lol. Thanks for the visit, Tom:-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/7/2024 1:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Surreal" write. What a great ending. WOW!!! You told a great story in just 3 lines. Have a great day with your wonderful win..................

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/11/2024 6:49:00 AM

Thank you very much, Paula:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/6/2024 6:27:00 AM

A moment so splendidly captured!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/11/2024 6:49:00 AM

Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2024 1:06:00 PM

now that's not only surreal but a heavenly dream!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/11/2024 6:50:00 AM

For legions of women, no doubt! :-) Thanks for dropping by, Andrea:-)