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Maestro

Composed, he walks towards the podium.
At first to applause, until a hush forms.
His heart beats like a water pump,
sweat drips - eyes fixed at his ensemble.
Audience anticipates,
as he stands at the nexus of musical creations.
With a brief glance - nods and closes his eyes,
baton in hand and a flick of wrist,
an oboe penetrates the silence,
violins trill and bass begin to roar.
His empathy connects with each note,
as his wand moves to the tempo,
conjuring symphonic magic,
softly then dramatically, 
as emotions ebb and flow,
like waves weaving solo tones.

Spectators lost in imagination.
Gradually the melody flows faster,
as trumpets and trombones blow.
He feels a sharp pain in his chest,
as his pores drip like little rivers on his lips,
but he still guides the harmonic mood
with precision and clarity.

As the horns blare and percussions echo,
he loses grip of his baton - falls onto his knees,
clutching his breast - the music stops,
pianist plays her last key - audience gasp

he falls to the ground - curtains close.






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Date: 4/26/2024 4:12:00 PM

Sounds like he gave his last amazing performance S, I'm waiting for the curtains to rise again and it was only dreaming lol, you tell it so well,
Date: 4/26/2024 12:18:00 AM

He needs stamina. I have seen many diverse maestros on the tube. One of them performed half a striptease. Crazy. Andre Rieu is my favorite.
Date: 4/25/2024 9:29:00 AM

The maestro gave his all in his last performance. Where there should be applause, instead a gasp. A high moment can fall to the lowest. Great write…applause here. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 4/24/2024 11:39:00 PM

I can truly feel the orchestra playing to a hushed audience and the maestro drives them on to greater heights. It made me smile the ending. Somebody give the composer of this sublime melody CPR!
Date: 4/24/2024 3:52:00 PM

beautiful and movinf tribute to classical music, my favorite, you penetrated the soul of an orchestra, yes we need maestros, thanks poet
Date: 4/24/2024 12:25:00 PM

like the maestro in your poem your pen, the baton led us on a journey through the symphony of your poem...
Date: 4/24/2024 9:46:00 AM

The poem is truly exceptional, perfectly capturing the essence of excellence and commitment that a conductor embodies. The show consistently delivers a breathtaking finale, with the creators prioritizing the overall quality over their personal preferences. This poem stirred up a range of emotions. The narrative of the conductor's journey, from initial nervousness to the development of his antics and eventual tragedy, is truly captivating and deeply moving.
Date: 4/24/2024 5:58:00 AM

Dear Silent One , reading this poem stirred many emotions within me. I loved the portrayal of the conductor's journey, from poised anticipation to the crescendo of performance and eventual tragedy, is both gripping and haunting. Yet, amidst the beauty of the performance, there is an underlying tension, a foreshadowing of the conductor's impending struggle. Ultimately, I felt how his collapse symbolizes the fragility of life and the transient nature of art, leaving the audience stunned and breathless. Good Luck on the Contest- Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/24/2024 5:58:00 AM

What a great way to go, in the midst of doing what you love. Great ending big guy
Date: 4/24/2024 5:51:00 AM

Tempo of your write builds through your verses as violine roars with magic of rhythms--splendidly delivered on the contest theme, SO. So sad the curtain closes--though not a bad way to go--loving what one loves to do.
Date: 4/24/2024 4:37:00 AM

What a dramatic and soul hitting ending to a very well crafted poem dear silent one! You did this maestro write very well. It was like as if i was seeing through your lines that flow so well with descriptive diction! I love many lines in this but the ending i think is my most fave part of this as well as “ violins trill and bass begin to roar. His empathy connects with each note, as his wand moves to the tempo, conjuring symphonic magic, softly then dramatically” whoa! Powerful yet delicate, and so very artistic! I absolutely loved this poem! Pleasure reading your work! Best wishes for the contest! I think this will do well! Sending you light always
Date: 4/24/2024 4:30:00 AM

I was so caught up in the maestro's performance and the different instruments, that I wasn't anticipating the surprise ending...makes me wonder. Did the maestro have a heart attack or just fall from intense exhaustion due to his passion for what he does. Well done, Silent One. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
Date: 4/24/2024 3:45:00 AM

This poem resonates strongly with me, you might remember me telling you that my dad was a professional musician. . Your poem is a gem as it captures the level of professionalism and dedication that a conductor possesses. They often push themselves to the limit in order to ensure the show reaches a spectacular climactic end, sometimes even sacrificing their own needs in the process. It takes a special kind of musician to go above and beyond like that, and their efforts certainly do not go unnoticed, as in the case of this selfless Soul. Good luck in the contest, its sure to do well...Hugs
Date: 4/24/2024 3:20:00 AM

Wow! Your poem is engaging and unique! I wonder if maestro had a heart attack? Great writing and good luck in the contest!

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