Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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Vanish, Voyage, Veiled, Vagabond Words Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Constance La France. Date: 04/01/2024. Written in Yalto Form: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

Veiled

within him 
     roars a loud storm 
          of sheer 
               anxiety 
                    and a sense of dread...

hidden deep 
     beneath 
          a veneer 
               of calm.
                    a hero...
 
well-known for 
     steely fortitude;
          a soldier confronting 
               a... 
                    cancer diagnosis.

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Valsa George April 9, 2024 at 4:51 AM Diagnosis of cancer is shattering. Yet he veiled all his anxiety with 'steely fortitude'. A soul stirring poem. We all hide dread and depression under the veneer of a composed countenance. Beautifully written, dear Edward and Congratulations on your great win. Edward Ibeh April 10, 2024 at 4:06 AM Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Valsa:-)

Constance La France April 7, 2024 at 2:45 PM Edward, congratulations on your win in my contest with this exceptional poem, hugs Edward Ibeh April 7, 2024 at 8:36 PM Thank you very much for the congratulations, feedback and my placement, dear Constance:-)

Paula Goldsmith April 7, 2024 at 10:36 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad/powerful "Veiled" write. Have a blessed day writing away........... Edward Ibeh April 7, 2024 at 8:33 PM Thank you very much, Paula:-)

Vijay Pandit April 2, 2024 at 7:57 AM Once again you shine in your signature Yalto form, my friend. Powerful emotions succinctly conveyed. The ending tugs the heart. Edward Ibeh April 2, 2024 at 8:03 AM Thank you so much, Vijay:-) Your continued support and feedbacks mean a great deal to me, my friend.

Ink Empress April 2, 2024 at 6:14 AM A soldier confronting cancer diagnosis? Thats scary and so well written about veiled dear EI, sometimes no one sees whats veiled beneath the strong and calm exterior , the anxiety,and dread, only God knows. What a deeply meaningful poem this is delivered with few words. In such a soulful and sincere manner. Love this! And felt this! A fave as well and best wishes Edward Ibeh April 2, 2024 at 8:01 AM Thank you very much for the awesome feedback, visit, and fave, Inky:-) Most obliged.