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To the One I Long For

How do you feel without me near, my darling angel? Please do answer me this without lying to yourself Does loneliness burn like acid? Do I steal away a chunky piece of you each time we bid goodbye? Are you alright by your lonesome or does a part of you die... until you're back in my arms? When I'm far out of sight how intensely do you pine for me? Do you feel strong and sturdy like the pillars carrying the weight of a roof? O, how do you feel without me near… Cease the night as I endorse you, trying not to forget the delight of your light last night. You shined as if you knew I was gazing at you with intense desire. I shall never release this passion; I would never allow you to feel abandoned. For I would give you the universe, and you would give me, well… you- in a perfect world. I have been forsaken and I sit and wonder if you feel the same. There is no lie you could say that could make me stay away; no answer could you give that could erase this vehement fervor of emotional adoration for you. My darling angel, I wonder, how do you feel without me near? I pine intensely awaiting your longing to appear. Date written: September 28, 2019

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Date: 10/4/2019 1:59:00 AM
Fabulous collaboration! Well done indeed. Bravo to you both! Collaborations are not easy but you pulled it off effortlessly it seems.
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Date: 10/1/2019 11:56:00 AM
wow, what a beautiful collaboration between the two of you...bravo! this is exquisite penning of two talented muses! :) hugs
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Date: 9/29/2019 12:21:00 PM
So beautiful and moving. We do get one or two angels in a life time............
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/29/2019 12:48:00 PM
true! thank you sweet Paula :)-luloo
Date: 9/29/2019 12:00:00 AM
You write wonderfully, LuLoo… and it's a great collaboration, something I'm so unsure of. Bless you sweetheart with many more wonders like this one
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/29/2019 12:47:00 PM
aww thanks sweet lady...too sweet of you :)-luloo
Date: 9/28/2019 3:03:00 PM
Yay! I absolutely LOVE it, Luloo:-) It's been an absolute pleasure collaborating with you! Blessings, my friend.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/29/2019 12:47:00 PM
yay from me too! I am honored to write with one of the best...:)-luloo
Date: 9/28/2019 1:26:00 PM
A nice write...great collaboration indeed...best to both of you...
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/29/2019 12:46:00 PM
thank you so much dear man :)-luloo

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