To the One I Long For

How do you feel without me
near, my darling angel?

Please do answer me this
without lying to yourself

Does loneliness burn like acid?

Do I steal away a chunky piece of you
each time we bid goodbye?

Are you alright by your lonesome
or does a part of you die...
until you're back in my arms?

When I'm far out of sight
how intensely do you pine for me?

Do you feel strong and sturdy
like the pillars carrying the weight of a roof?

O, how do you feel without me near…

Cease the night as I endorse you,
trying not to forget the delight of
your light last night.
You shined as if you knew I was
gazing at you with intense desire.
I shall never release this passion;
I would never allow you to feel
abandoned.

For I would give you the universe,
and you would give me, well…
you-
in a perfect world.

I have been forsaken and I
sit and wonder if you feel the same.
There is no lie you could say
that could make me stay away;
no answer could you give that
could erase this vehement
fervor of emotional adoration
for you.

My darling angel, I wonder,
how do you feel without me near?
I pine intensely awaiting your
longing to appear.




Date written: September 28, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 10/4/2019 1:59:00 AM
Fabulous collaboration! Well done indeed. Bravo to you both! Collaborations are not easy but you pulled it off effortlessly it seems.
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Date: 10/1/2019 11:56:00 AM
wow, what a beautiful collaboration between the two of you...bravo! this is exquisite penning of two talented muses! :) hugs
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Date: 9/29/2019 12:21:00 PM
So beautiful and moving. We do get one or two angels in a life time............
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Date: 9/29/2019 12:48:00 PM
true! thank you sweet Paula :)-luloo
Date: 9/29/2019 12:00:00 AM
You write wonderfully, LuLoo… and it's a great collaboration, something I'm so unsure of. Bless you sweetheart with many more wonders like this one
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Date: 9/29/2019 12:47:00 PM
aww thanks sweet lady...too sweet of you :)-luloo
Date: 9/28/2019 3:03:00 PM
Yay! I absolutely LOVE it, Luloo:-) It's been an absolute pleasure collaborating with you! Blessings, my friend.
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Date: 9/29/2019 12:47:00 PM
yay from me too! I am honored to write with one of the best...:)-luloo
Date: 9/28/2019 1:26:00 PM
A nice write...great collaboration indeed...best to both of you...
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Date: 9/29/2019 12:46:00 PM
thank you so much dear man :)-luloo
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