Carpentry

Carpentry
It’s the first nail 
That hurts,  the sharpness
That pierces right through the  framed  constructs
Of our wooden fears
 With
 unrelenting precision 
As if we could unhurry our blood or 
Hammer a dismantled dream 
Into a different shape  
 Unfurled  blueprints  mark  the unfinished house 
Where a  doorjamb is still  annoyingly unaligned
Or a window frame not plumb
We call upon  the   carpenter , 
 The one who can hold nails
In his teeth, 
The one who knows 
Crossbeams shudder
In the gold dust of  what they must  bear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sambourne Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 8:35 PM
Your Carpentry poem, Elizabeth, is a true gem. It glows with the resonance of metaphorical meanings. In a sense, we are all carpenters who build the crossbeams of life, in "unfinished houses."(If only I were better with the tools.) A superb write! Sincerely, Brian
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September 25, 2021 at 3:46 PM
Whew, what a beauty this poem is, Elizabeth! Happy--and lucky!--that I stumbled upon it, because it's a keeper! Faved.
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October 25, 2016 at 3:43 PM
Elizabeth, , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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October 24, 2016 at 10:07 AM
I just love the analogies here Elizabeth. Love and life can be like this un-level home, as we search the directory for a suitable carpenter that can make things square again.
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October 20, 2016 at 10:22 PM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath.........
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