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It Happened On A Misty Morning - Collaboration Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Charles Messina. Date: 10/02/2023

It Happened On a Misty Morning

Wettened by the morning's dew
Closely spaced where rows of roses grew 
     Footprints stained the cobblestone 
  Where my love and I had walked, alone.

  Bright, promising future, at our disposal.
  When secured with a marriage proposal,
   Bells of sheer contentment rang aloud 
   Beneath the dawn's slow-turning cloud.
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November 2, 2023 at 4:55 AM
Edward, first of all thank you so much for helping me to fix the glitch for my contest. Secondly, this is another brilliant write from your magical pen my friend. Unfortunately, I didn't work well with my collaborated poem in which I will be posting. But by all means this is worthy of a 1st place win! Thanks again...Charlie
Ibeh Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 10:18 AM
You're welcome, Charles:-) That's fine, my friend. I enjoyed writing for your contest nevertheless. I'm glad you fixed the glitch! I appreciate the wonderful comments. Blessings...
Jones Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 9:10 AM
I love this one! Good luck in the contest!
Ibeh Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 10:16 AM
Thank you very much, Karen:-) I'm glad you did, my friend.
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