Rambling

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Rambling, Rundown, Rapture Words Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 02/19/2024

rambling is all he does when drunk, which is often; nothing he says ever makes sense. don't be surprised if he falls like timber... you won't get a word in edgewise. please, quit the bottle, sir! an expert in rambling

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Constance La France

Date: 4/23/2024 6:01:00 AM

Edward, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/28/2024 9:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative Rictameter "Rambling" write. You told a wonderful story in a few lines... Have a great/fun day writing away...............

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/28/2024 5:05:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paula:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/19/2024 1:46:00 PM

Alcohol does that to an otherwise sane mind. You described him brilliantly, my friend, in just a few words.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/20/2024 2:32:00 PM

Thank you very much, Vijay:-)