In My Beautiful Dream

in my beautiful dream -

enwrapped by green tranquility -

I am kissing your tender lips

beneath the bluest sky

as meadowlarks serenade us




Date written: May 14, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 6:39 PM
A gorgeous setting you have displayed in this lovely entry Andrea. Congratulations on your second placement! : )xxoo
Lindley Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 2:46 PM
Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Lind68868 contest my friend! God bless.... Robert
Jae Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 3:52 PM
Congrats! I love the scene you portray!
Andresen Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 12:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 11:49 AM
Ah, a timeless serenade. Love the last line. Congrats on your win in the contest, Andrea. Best wishes, Gershon
La France Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 9:35 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write!
May Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 8:35 PM
Beautiful write and win Andrea...Congrats..
Callus Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 4:36 PM
The captivating imagery of an equally captivating dream. Your dreams are enviable, Andrea!! Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 7:02 PM
and also made up. haha
Kaya Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 3:12 PM
So romantic. It made me think of someone.
Godwin Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 1:01 PM
Oh, she'll love this - I do. Love you, too ... CayCay
Horne Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 7:24 AM
beautiful romantic poem
Leffanta Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Whether or not you win the contest, may your dream come true! Aloha! Rico
Sergi Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 1:53 PM
Toward the end, all we have left is our dreams. Beautiful imagery, Andrea!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 8:35 AM
Nicely flowing dream sequence, Andrea.
Pandit Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:36 AM
Simply beautiful..so well written, Andrea.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 3:35 AM
Best wishes on this terse verse of a gem Andrea, Aloha wk
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 1:04 AM
Lovely Andrea. Good luck in the contest; your words are always so full of prettiness, and a wonderful combination.
Cunningham Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 12:01 AM
Beautiful image Andrea, its a shame we have to wake from such dreams. Good luck. Tom.
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