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In My Beautiful Dream



in my beautiful dream -

enwrapped by green tranquility -

I am kissing your tender lips

beneath the bluest sky

as meadowlarks serenade us




Date written: May 14, 2019
Name of Challenge: Writing Challenge 2, May 2019, Lind68868 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart
Theme Chosen: #3, a dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/18/2019 11:29:00 PM
Breathtaking my friend! :)
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Date: 5/24/2019 6:39:00 PM
A gorgeous setting you have displayed in this lovely entry Andrea. Congratulations on your second placement! : )xxoo
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Date: 5/24/2019 2:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Lind68868 contest my friend! God bless.... Robert
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Date: 5/22/2019 3:52:00 PM
Congrats! I love the scene you portray!
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Date: 5/21/2019 12:00:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/21/2019 11:49:00 AM
Ah, a timeless serenade. Love the last line. Congrats on your win in the contest, Andrea. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 5/21/2019 9:35:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write!
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Date: 5/20/2019 8:35:00 PM
Beautiful write and win Andrea...Congrats..
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Date: 5/16/2019 4:36:00 PM
The captivating imagery of an equally captivating dream. Your dreams are enviable, Andrea!! Regards // paul
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Date: 5/16/2019 7:02:00 PM
and also made up. haha
Date: 5/16/2019 3:12:00 PM
So romantic. It made me think of someone.
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Date: 5/16/2019 1:01:00 PM
Oh, she'll love this - I do. Love you, too ... CayCay
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Date: 5/16/2019 7:24:00 AM
beautiful romantic poem
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Date: 5/15/2019 2:28:00 PM
Whether or not you win the contest, may your dream come true! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/15/2019 1:53:00 PM
Toward the end, all we have left is our dreams. Beautiful imagery, Andrea!
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Date: 5/15/2019 8:35:00 AM
Nicely flowing dream sequence, Andrea.
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Date: 5/15/2019 7:36:00 AM
Simply beautiful..so well written, Andrea.
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Date: 5/15/2019 4:33:00 AM
Beautiful indeed. I am not going to enter this contest but wrote six of them as a medley. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 5/15/2019 3:35:00 AM
Best wishes on this terse verse of a gem Andrea, Aloha wk
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Date: 5/15/2019 1:04:00 AM
Lovely Andrea. Good luck in the contest; your words are always so full of prettiness, and a wonderful combination.
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Date: 5/15/2019 12:01:00 AM
Beautiful image Andrea, its a shame we have to wake from such dreams. Good luck. Tom.
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