Forlorn Hope

Sitting on the cusp of dusk and evening
Placidly he ruminates where life has been 
When she still believed in vibrant springs
And exulted dawning of purple mornings
Echoing exuberance of seasons’ calling
Fragile, yet colorful, as autumnal leaves
Delicate, aesthetic, as snowflakes falling--
Until she chose to surrender her dreams.

Oh! how fervently she cherished streams
Zigzagging ebulliently on their property
Digging lanes through prairies dark green,
Giggling, rushing, curving, on life-journey,
Pointing zealously, how to redirect destiny
Hosting daydreams of daffodils, milkweeds,
And tranquil bliss edifying lotus sanctuary.

Pity, neither did he feel her zestful appeal,
Nor could he allay those spaces left empty--
Between life as it is, and life that could be--
Saddled by incongruence defying harmony.

Lonesome he wailed tracing her footprints:
Cheered birds singing, doted stars twinkling,
Breathed-in her air scented with jasmines,
Buzzed in moth-passions of nocturnal winds,
Gazed deep woods where moon was rising,
And found her there, but not her meaning.

Yet, she came by, reminiscing through time,
Staying long enough, scanning the night skies--
But much as she tried, the Venus didn’t smile,
Alas! when she left, that was final goodbye.

April 28, 2021
Poem of the day on April 29, 2021 
Placed 1st: This or That, Vol 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Title chosen: Forlorn Hope
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George Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 5:34 AM
So brilliantly written Vijay ! You have a telescopic view into every character....! What a contrast between him and her ! Her ebullience is never matched by the inertia of the man who could never allay the empty spaces. No wonder she left with a final goodbye, though his plight tugs at the heart strings !
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May 24, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Such a well thought-out poetry Vijay! Enjoyed reading it!!
Pandit Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 9:31 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, Smita. Many thanks.
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May 18, 2021 at 8:50 PM
Vijay, 'found her there, but not her meaning'. The alienated woods you explored in forlorn hope and her cherished streams. So fine in melancholy write. Even as her smile slipped away from skies reigning over surrendered dreams. -Richard
Pandit Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 5:10 AM
Much appreciate Richard your visit and kind remarks--many thanks.
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May 14, 2021 at 8:41 AM
Back with congratulations for your first place win Vijay. This is a very special poem. All the best. Many blessings.
Pandit Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 5:46 AM
Thank you Sam--much appreciate.
Dutta Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 9:14 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP onyour wonderful poem. Blessing.
Pandit Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 5:58 AM
Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks, Anisha. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Ibeh Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 2:52 PM
Wow, this poem is one of your many masterworks, Vijay! I can see why this won you a well-deserved POTD. Faving this for sure. Congrats on your win in my contest!
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May 14, 2021 at 5:57 AM
Your comments are very special. Much appreciate Your vote of approval, Edward. Many thanks for the kind remarks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
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May 12, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Hello Vijay pandit, this sounds like a winner to me. I hope it wins a contest. Enjoy your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 11:05 AM
Hello Vijay, I hope all is well with you. Your welcome my friend.
Pandit Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 3:46 PM
So very kind of you Darlene--many thanks.
Pathak Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 5:45 AM
A much deserving place among TOP HUNDRED and POTD, congrats dear poet.
Pandit Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 3:46 PM
Much appreciate--honored by your visit and comments--many many thanks.
Gentile Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:44 AM
So sorry I missed this gem Vijay!! Belated congratulations! I found your passages to be hauntingly beautiful. Happy Tuesday !!
Pandit Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 8:15 AM
Thank you Mike--much appreciate your visit and comments.
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May 8, 2021 at 5:34 AM
Wonderful poetry beautifully scripted Vijay, so deserving of poem of the day… Belle
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May 8, 2021 at 10:29 AM
Thank you Belle--much appreciate.
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May 6, 2021 at 11:15 AM
Belated congratulations on p.o.t.d. award, Vijay. This is beautiful, full of imagery and very emotional. Going to my favs! Regards // paul
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May 6, 2021 at 12:16 PM
So special to receive a FAVE from you Paul. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE. Regards.
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May 5, 2021 at 8:05 PM
What an enchanting entry for the contest Vijay. Congratulations on having it honored with POTD! It is beautiful! Forgive this for being belated. Blessings xxoo
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May 6, 2021 at 12:15 PM
Much appreciate my friend--always a pleasure! Many thanks, Connie.
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 1:37 PM
and awesome personification
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May 6, 2021 at 12:14 PM
Thanks again, Andrea.
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May 5, 2021 at 1:36 PM
POTD. Big congrats, Vijay!!
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 12:14 PM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
May Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 7:51 PM
Great write Vijay, Congrats on POTD
Pandit Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 10:22 AM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
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May 2, 2021 at 1:41 PM
By belated congrats for your POTD. I earmarked your poem as a masterpiece.
Pandit Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 2:27 PM
You sure did--special thanks, Victor. Much appreciate your return visit.
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May 1, 2021 at 11:08 AM
How did I miss this superb write Jijay? Your imagery is just stunning - love "the cusp of dusk!" Just one example of your images that make your writing so special! All the best my friend! Congratulations on your POTD!
Pandit Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 2:26 PM
So very kind of you Sam--much appreciate--many thanks.
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May 1, 2021 at 3:10 AM
Hi Vijay, I’m just coming back to give you Big congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 2:25 PM
Appreciate your return visit Alexis--many thanks my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 4:57 PM
wow. this is fantastic, Vijay. So deep and so descriptive. I think it will do very well in the contest.
Pandit Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 2:25 PM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate your kind feedback.
Gauthier Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 12:48 PM
Beautiful imagery and penning, Vijay. Congrats on your POTD ~
Pandit Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 2:24 PM
Much appreciate, Line--many thanks.
Proxenos Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 10:52 AM
Oh that was a sad ending Vijay, but a beautiful creative poem with your blessed talent - you are truly a marvel! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 2:24 PM
Thank you Jennifer--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.
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April 30, 2021 at 2:43 AM
A beautiful romantic, nostalgic write Vijay. Sending congratulations on your receiving poem of the day... Belle
Pandit Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 5:32 AM
Glad you could visit with your lovely comments--much appreciate, Belle. Many thanks.
Daniel Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 10:41 PM
A beautiful and a deep write, Vijay, congratulations on getting POTD:)
Pandit Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 5:31 AM
Thank you Jo--much appreciate your kind remarks.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 7:21 PM
Imagery and effervescence. Sadness and happiness. Left without a smile. Great writing, Vijay! Congratulations on POTD!
Pandit Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 5:30 AM
That is so very kind--many thanks Kim for your lovely comments.
Fenn Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 5:52 PM
Wow, you capture both beauty and melancholy at the same time. Congrats on POTD.
Pandit Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 5:29 AM
Much appreciate Jennifer--many thanks for the kind remarks.
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