Notes About The Poem

I Saw God, But Now What Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Unseeking Seeker. Date written: 04/16/2024

I Saw God, But Now What


Once faithless;
hopelessly trapped
in isolating darkness, I began
searching for God,
and he came to me
in prayer.

He whispers to me...
               "Do not be afraid; take my hand"...

Lost with no way to turn,
I sought refuge in the Lord.
He led me
out of the darkness
and bathed me
with his resplendent light.

He took my despair
and gave me hope.
After regaining
my spiritual balance;
my faith in him,
restored and stronger than ever...

Never again will it waver.
Now I believe there's a power
greater than myself.
After God's gift 
of salvation, I'll never 
stray from him...

again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Pandit Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 6:38 AM
Words of enlightenment resonate, my friend.--He took my despair and gave me hope. After regaining my spiritual balance; my faith in him, restored and stronger than ever... Solemn voice to your poem, Edward,
Ibeh Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 8:34 AM
Thank you so much for the awesome visit and comments, Vijay:-)
Empress Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 4:49 AM
This is so powerful and soulfully moving dear EI! What a brilliant take on this prompt, how one found light and it gave me goosebumps as i read “ He whispers to me... "Do not be afraid; take my hand"...“ felt that! Best wishes for the contest
Ibeh Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 8:33 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Inky:-)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace