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As dawn breaks birds start singing, I hear their sweet chorus and smile, knowing that I awake to see the sun rise on a brand new day. Life passes by all too quickly, so we should all cherish each moment we have left Yalto poems only Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet 9/17/19 Checked with PS syllable counter 3 4 2 4 5 3 2 3 2 3 3 5 6 1 5

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Date: 10/2/2019 2:08:00 PM
So true Jan. My husband and I were discussing how fast this past 30 years have flown by just yesterday. I loved your beautiful winning poem. Congratulations on your second placement! : ) xxoo
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Date: 10/1/2019 12:40:00 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for the advice; and for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Date: 9/30/2019 6:47:00 PM
Yes, we should cherish each moment because we don't know how long we have...congrats on your top placement Jan.
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Date: 9/30/2019 2:55:00 PM
Beautiful uplifting poem Jan, so deserving of your podium win. I am always up to see the sunrise and this morning over Eastbourne there was the most vividly coloured sky of deep purples, oranges and red it was truly stunning. Like your poem the sunrise always lifts my spirit and fills me with joy for the day ahead. Many congrats Jan. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 9/30/2019 1:32:00 PM
Congrats Jan you're on a roll lately, winning becomes you!
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Date: 9/30/2019 12:47:00 PM
Back with congrats on a great win, Jan!:-)
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Date: 9/30/2019 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations Jan! What a beautiful poem and message :)
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Date: 9/30/2019 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations Jan, your poem has placed "Second" in my PoetrySoup contest. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 9/30/2019 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations Jan on your beautiful winner :)
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Date: 9/24/2019 8:33:00 AM
Lovely, Jan! I had a sweet bird singing just for me this morning. I believe! I believe!
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Date: 9/20/2019 3:56:00 PM
Indeed! The emotional beauty of your poem is tinted with melancholy like the leaves tinged with color in early autumn. Superb and affecting poetry, Jan. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/20/2019 8:27:00 AM
A lovely poem Jan - my favorite time to see the sun rising is when we go down to the coast as we leave at about 4.00 in the morning when it is still pitch dark. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/19/2019 3:46:00 PM
Beautiful poem, awesome pic choice
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Date: 9/19/2019 12:39:00 PM
As always you rank as one of PS... top Poetess... My opinion Grand Write... Wish you high placement in the contest Enjoyed this verse Write on... James
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Date: 9/18/2019 4:08:00 PM
Hi Jan, This is just lovely my friend. The message within this is good as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Enjoy the of your day:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/18/2019 5:41:00 AM
This is a brilliant Yalto, Jan:-) I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest! Faved.
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Date: 9/18/2019 9:41:00 AM
I'm delighted you liked it Edward, thanks for creating this challenging form!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/18/2019 12:49:00 AM
Such a beautiful feeling to see the sun rise with a new hope. Best for a win. Hugs xx
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Date: 9/18/2019 9:41:00 AM
It certainly is Victor:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/17/2019 6:51:00 PM
Correct Jan … life can become extinct for anyone at any age. Life for the moment to an extent - thanks again Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 9/18/2019 9:40:00 AM
my hubby's cancer returned we take nothing for granted Lindsay and live life to the full:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/17/2019 5:59:00 PM
Apaches rise before dawn to greet the sun with prayers of thanks for another day with another opportunity to make this world a better place for ALL creatures to live in harmony. Isn't it strange that the sun rises every morning, yet most people still can not perceive the web of life? Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/18/2019 9:39:00 AM
I love your comment Rico, thanks!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/17/2019 5:02:00 PM
wonderful, dear Jan!! how are you doing there today?
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Date: 9/18/2019 9:39:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, all good here son has gone now but I still have little time for writing or soup:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/17/2019 4:50:00 PM
Indeed, we often take the beauty of nature for granted. Glad you are a "Carpe' Diem" type lady. You did a great job with this form, Jan. I don't think all the syllable counts would work for me, but you handled them masterfully. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 9/18/2019 9:38:00 AM
thanks Carolyn I enjoyed the challenge of the form:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/17/2019 1:47:00 PM
Beautifully done Jan, so uplifting and inspirational
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Date: 9/17/2019 4:46:00 PM
thanks Chris I can write the odd serious poem from time to time :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/17/2019 10:17:00 AM
this is lovely, jan, and so optimistic! maybe if i could see that sunrise, i'd feel that way more often...
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Date: 9/17/2019 12:04:00 PM
Hubby has some super pics of sunsets not so many of sunrise though!:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 9/17/2019 9:56:00 AM
Beautifully expressed. Blessings to you
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Date: 9/17/2019 12:03:00 PM
Thanks Regina:-) hugs jan x
Date: 9/17/2019 9:25:00 AM
Yes! Positive feeling!
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Date: 9/17/2019 12:03:00 PM
Thanks Abdullah:-) hugs jan xx
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