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Forum Home » High Critique » Wolf Cry or Not

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7/25/2012 6:08:06 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
So you've considered suicide,
Life's so bad you want to die?
Is this a moment of honesty ,
Or are you being an attention horror,
Guess either way doesn't matter,
It'd be the wolf cry I can't ignore,


Left your house unconvinced,
This wont be the end of this,
Cant encourage this behavior,
You've got to fix this, you're you'reonly savior,
I know people you can talk to withdegrees,
Don't want my friends' existence tocease


I wonder why you told me this,
Keeping people alive isn't why I exist,
A huge burden just fell in my lap,
I don't own a life saving cap,
I'm no superhero, but I'll stand by myfriend,
Just don't want your life story to end
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