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The Canoe

The umber canoe floats. The long curly leaves of a weeping willow casts eel-shaped shadows. The mocha river swirls when the bass are caught, they twist the nylon lines. The clouds are heavy monsterous shapes; shades of violet, deep greys- they change the summer sky into rain. Winds push the canoe towards the muddy edge. Earth colors merge; the rain- drops bombard and rise with the waves, wood splits.

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Date: 12/14/2020 5:14:00 AM
WoW! Jennifer, You painted such a good portrait with your words. I could just picture the whole scene. Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful day :-) Alexis
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