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My Aim

I want to be the best Just like the rest The sun shine so bright And for once I want to be right I might be not that clever Even if I fall it doesn't matter Again I will strong And I will correct the wrong I need a clearer vision So that I can start my mission I want to climb that hill Even if I felt ill Yes, I want to reach the highest mountain Even if its going to be tough i'll maintain One step at a time i'll reach that line And till then victory will be mine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/23/2010 5:39:00 AM
Lots of determination!
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Date: 11/5/2009 12:47:00 PM
Really like your poem, we all need a clearer vision on what we want from life! have a look at my poem, A Clarity Of Vision, love Simone
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Date: 10/22/2009 2:10:00 PM
and what will victory be? Lots to think on. Light & Love
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Date: 9/17/2009 4:15:00 PM
A Beautifully-Stated, Personal Anthem... One, that we all could aspire to... MoonBee
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Date: 8/15/2009 6:29:00 AM
I missed some of the excellent poetry written and posted here yesterday Shirley. I am enjoying reading them this morning. Thank you for sharing yours. Love, Carol
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