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A Poem For That One Girl

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During my third year of high school in 201X, our English class presented us with a final challenge: crafting an original poem. Despite my inexperience in poetry, I was fortunate to have found inspiration in someone special - my muse. This piece marked the beginning of my poetic journey, and though time has weathered those feelings and years have passed since we last spoke, I remain grateful for having captured that moment of pure emotion in verse. (The passing mark I received was merely a bonus to what became a cherished memory of adolescent inspiration.)


 

This is a poem for my heart's desire An angel dancing through heaven's light Whose presence sets my soul afire And turns my darkness into bright This is a poem for nature's grace My anchor strong, yet sweetest pain Like morning dew upon her face Her love flows pure as summer rain This is a poem for twilight's gem Whose brilliance dims the stars above Each night sky forms her diadem While constellations speak of love This is a poem for that rare soul Who spins my world in perfect art Her essence makes my life feel whole Two rhythms beating, one shared heart -

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Date: 12/16/2024 11:38:00 AM
Wonderful. May you keep showcasing your talent on the soup. Original style, and excellent choice of words to describe feelings that describe in total clarity the romantic thoughts that make life so special. Best regards David in NZ
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Date: 12/9/2024 10:32:00 AM
Reminded me of the starting stanzas of "She's a Phantom of Delight" By W.Wordsworth!
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Date: 12/8/2024 8:42:00 PM
A fantastic tribute to this special muse. I think you are starting out fairly young with poetry. That's very nice for you. I was in my 40's. Haha I love your first post here
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Date: 12/8/2024 8:33:00 AM
Just beautiful. Pangie xx
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Date: 12/7/2024 9:28:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup, aking Kababayan. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/5/2024 1:39:00 PM
Pretty poem full of romantic references. Hey, welcome to PS! Best way to get noticed is by visiting and commenting on others poetry and joining contests
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